wo be khabar hi sahi mery haal sy yaksar....

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

S.786 July 28, 2008, 4:40pm 1

tamaam omr tarapty rahen kissi k liye

aur apni muot bhi aay tuu bas ossi k liye

jawaaz-e-tark,e taalluq tu kuchh na thaa warna

bichhar gaya hon men tujhsy teri khushi k liye

khulla ye bhaed bhi,lekin tujhy ganwaaky milaa

munaafiqat bhi zuroori thi duosti k liye

wo be khaabar hi sahi meri zaat sy yaksar

men muztarib hoon magar aaj bhi ossi k liye

zaraa onhen bhi kabhi dekh mery nabz shanaas!

azaab sehty hen , jeety hen ju kissi k liye

moazzam.mbs July 28, 2008, 4:57pm 2

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marvellous!!!!!!! i like it v much.

Shab-e-Hijar July 28, 2008, 7:38pm 3

bohat bohat khoob :k:

EEMAAN July 28, 2008, 8:18pm 4

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Wowwwwwwww,,zabardast..

S.786 July 28, 2008, 8:35pm 5

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v.v.thanks...muazzam,shabu,imaan...

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alimani786 July 28, 2008, 8:51pm 6

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bohot khuubb...

S.786 July 29, 2008, 5:42am 7

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shukriya...ali

Sheal July 29, 2008, 5:43am 8

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zaberdast

ASA July 29, 2008, 8:31am 9

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mashAllah

Ali_2 July 29, 2008, 10:35am 10

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buhat khoob :k:

immu July 29, 2008, 12:16pm 11

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Excellent effort

ruswa July 29, 2008, 12:42pm 12

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Bohat Alla S.786

S.786 July 29, 2008, 6:17pm 13

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nawaazish,karam,shukriya.......to all....dustoo