wo an-kahay b sab keh gaya
jo shakhs gaatay rubaab sa tha
wo rafta rafta bikhar gaya
jo nokhaiz kalli k shbaab sa tha
jo doobnay or ubharnay b na day
kabhi rah-e-khizar kabhi gardab sa tha
main warq warq parrhoon usay
phir b na uss ko samajh sakoon
kabhi harf harf mila mujhay
kabhi natamam baab sa tha
main khala main mo-aliq ik toota hua tara
wo takht nasheen mehtaab sa tha
sab tshna rahay qais-o-ranjha
per uss ka ishq labab sa tha
wo na jan saka meri pyas ko
jo shakhs sabeel o aab sa tha…
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA…
Just Amazing.
I like the last four lines most.
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA...
Hmmmm...!
**wo rafta rafta bikhar gaya
jo nokhaiz kalli k shbaab sa tha
**jo doobnay or ubharnay b na day
kabhi rah-e-khizar kabhi gardab sa tha
khub....really liked and enjoyed....
pyaraey or nazuk khialat....
sad but solid
:)
khush rahean....****
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA...
hummm
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA…
Buhat khoubsurat poetry …alfaaz ka acha chunao :cobra:
par yah labab ka use mujhay kuch samjh naheen aaya ![]()
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA...
Labab matlab nichor bole to ganne ka rus.
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA…
I don’t think so she used this word in this manner :cobra:
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA…
sab tshna rahay qais-o-ranjha
per uss ka ishq **labab **sa tha
Dekhen jab koi tishna hota hai to uski pyas bujhane ke liye pani dia jata hai. yahan qafiya ke hisaab se labab mozun tareen lafz tha, jiske mani pyas bujhane wali cheez lia ja sakta hai aur ganne ka rus ![]()
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA…
iss smily
kay use karnay par aksar chapair parti hay ![]()
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA...
thanx every one.
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA…
but i used it in this manner,ill mannered ![]()
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA…
barri barri meharbani paen meri bat samajh li :hinna:
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA…
barri yad-dasht hai sannaan chirray ![]()
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA…
baray maharbani urdu tarjuma kar dain ill mannered ka :cobra:
kia baat hay Shazia Panday ![]()
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA…
nai wo tu mujhe nai ata per kesa itefaq hai,ill manner se yad aya ap ka kya hal hai ![]()
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA…
Ittefaq say yaad aaya, tum nay munh dhoya hay aaj
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Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA…
Ye kia chal raha hai yahan ![]()
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA…
Chalnay say yaad aaya kia haal hay aap kay dimagh ka
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Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA…
Dimagh se yaad aya ye kaisa thread hai
Re: WO AN-KAHAY B SAB KEH GAYA…
Ala shazia apa :k: