Wo aftaab ka suraj tha merii duniya mien.. ~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Ajeeb shaks tha hatho`N mien haath choor gaya
Wo du Qadam chala tha k saath choor gaya

Un k naam ki nisbat se keh gaya sub kuch
Merii zabaan pe mgr apni baat choor gaya

Zameen ka boojh mere sur pe aa gaya jaise
Wo aisee paoun talay Qainaat choor gaya

Wo aftaab ka suraj tha merii duniya mien
Gaya tu saray zamanay mein raat choor gaya

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HeArT HaCKeR

Excellent … as usual … :k::k::k:
Thanks for sharing and keep it up …

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thankyou Arif bhai :flower1:. .

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Nice1 :k:

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Bohat khoob. :k:

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zabardast :k:

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Nice :hug:

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very nice :k:

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vivo… maheenu.. shoby.. Aryaan.. chanduu Thankyou :flower1:

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Wah HH Jee Bahut Khoob :k:

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Re: Wo aftaab ka suraj tha merii duniya mien.. ~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *

*
Wo aftaab ka suraj tha merii duniya mien
Gaya tu saray zamanay mein raat choor gaya

*

[/QUOTE]

tuu jo bhichra hay toa ehsaas hua hay mujh ko
k too nahee tha teray saath aik Dunya thee

HH aaj aap nay mera dil hack ker lia iss sher k baad :D khush rahaiN

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Re: Wo aftaab ka suraj tha merii duniya mien.. ~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by HeArT HaCKeR: *

*
Wo aftaab ka suraj tha merii duniya mien
Gaya tu saray zamanay mein raat choor gaya

*

[/QUOTE]

tuu jo bhichra hay toa ehsaas hua hay mujh ko
k too nahee tha teray saath aik Dunya thee

HH aaj aap nay mera dil hack ker lia iss sher k baad :D khush rahaiN

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thanks dost jee

show-sha.. aww jaan bhooj ker nahi kia :D .. thanks..

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Re: Wo aftaab ka suraj tha merii duniya mien.. ~

two thumbz wayyyy up yaara .. once again beautiful choice .. :k: .. :hug: ..

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thanks ghazalluu :hug: :~)

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Ajeeb shaks tha hatho`N mien haath choor gaya
Wo du Qadam chala tha k saath choor gaya

Beautiful…:k::k:

thnx HH 4 sharing…:flower2: