wo ab merey kisi khab mein nahin aye ga

jhansi_ki_rani · July 3, 2006, 6:13am

raqabat ka lafz is baab mein nahin aye ga
us ka zikar ab kisi kitaab mein nhi aye ga
chalo ratjaga manayen k ab soney sey kya hasil
wo ab merey kisi khuab mein nahin aye ga
main baat sey mukar k khatawar thehrun gi
us ka phirna wafa sey hisaab mein nhin aye ga
dard darkar hai mutrib dhhun mein asar laney k liye
na ho to, soz rabab mein nahin aye gaa
ham ehl-e-husan hai so phool bhejtey jatey hain
jantey hain aik kanta b jawab mein nhi aye ga
jo nasha baham pewast ho k ho ga hasil
wo lutf yoon milney sey hijaaab mein nhi aye ga

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 3, 2006, 6:25am

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Hmmm its yours? anyway Very nice ,thanks for sharing:-)

jhansi_ki_rani · July 3, 2006, 12:18pm

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yes Gul.. its mine thx for liking

Koyal · July 3, 2006, 12:35pm

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ap ka naam dekh k koi kesay khawab main a sakta :p ;)
btw nice one :p

Prince_Ali · July 5, 2006, 12:14am

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Very nice :k:

Sannan · July 10, 2006, 7:44am

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**
jo nasha baham pewast ho k ho ga hasil
wo lutf yoon milney sey hijaaab mein nhi aye ga**

*Very Romantic ..... Sub Khariat Hay na Rani g *

jhansi_ki_rani · July 10, 2006, 10:30am

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yes sanan every thing is ok

maha_cutest · July 10, 2006, 11:18am

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very nice creation ....

usman22 · July 11, 2006, 1:42am

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buhat khoob

Sannan · July 11, 2006, 2:56am

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*Sounds good to know every thing is ok .. anyway u've written very nice and i'm still thinking that from how many years u r writting ?????? .... *

jhansi_ki_rani · July 18, 2006, 9:27am

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Hmmmmmmm sanan g, baat phir wo hi a gai k main ney likhna shuru kiya 3 or 4 mnth likha or chor diya , meri kawishen 4 mnth k arsey pe muheet hain,bas:) ab nahin likh rahi

charming_gurl · July 29, 2006, 2:08pm

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bohut Zabardast

jhansi_ki_rani · July 30, 2006, 1:44pm

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thx charming

Sannan · July 31, 2006, 7:57am

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Rani G aap to musalsul likh rahi hain aur kamal ka likh rahi hain … leekan kuch aisi cheezoon par jin par main likhna chahta that aap nay pahlay he likh mara aur mujhay samjh naheen aa rahi hay kah main kia likhoon …

jhansi_ki_rani · August 1, 2006, 3:28pm

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ye baat to tashweesh wali hai sanan g:P koi bat nahi koshish jari rakhen naye ideas a jayen gey zehan mein

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 7, 2006, 12:05pm

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BEAUTIFUL :)

Jhuki_Nigahein · August 8, 2006, 1:00am

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buhat khoob

jhansi_ki_rani · August 8, 2006, 6:32am

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thx hacker and nigahen