wife ko begum kyon kehte hain

Re: wife ko begum kyon kehte hain

you are missing:

‘Tte’ after ‘te’ and before ‘se’
Z(y)aal (like in Z(y)aala baari)
among the bold one, there is nothing like ‘je’ and ‘ze’ should come after ‘re’
‘Qaaf’ is missing after ‘kaaf’
‘dau chashmi hay’ is missing