do tell me if you guys think im wrong but i am sick and tired of plp being so ignorant about poetry , who made the rule that it has to rhyme it has to be relvent to the topic but in noway it HAs to rhyme we are not in second grade , and even than we should not limit ourselves to cat, hat, bat, ect…plp plz think outside the box and dont take me wrong i am not pist off because some one said that my poem didnt rhyme because it rhymes to me and thats all what matters satisfying my own artistic thirst what is good to me may be garbage to you which is fine but dont judge a good poem by its rhyming
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Next time don’t sing it, just read it to others. Plus under the topic put (azaad poetry) 
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roses are red
violets are blue
sometimes when i look at the moon
i think of you
i am reminded of
of your gloom
that’s cuz you look
like a prune
all wrinkly and pock-marked
and grey
maybe you should wash your face
with a fork and a spoon
please do not judge my creativity. this is from the bottom of my heart, and if you make bad comments about it, then you are attacking my own self, my jiggar, my dil. 
fakt, qalam baaz.
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original khumar good one......
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poets are sensitive ppl - do not hurt them 
thx 
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thanx for what ?????
to tell me i m very sensitive
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awwww i didnt know u were sensetive but heck i didnt even know u were a poet sunshine hmmm.......(JK)
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aw u look pissed:hmmm:
but if u are a poet/poetess then u are acting natural:phati: