When the tears fall
& cuddle into the depths of sand,
When every view looks so vague
You nod your head in total despair.
& when everything’s out of control
& that when only sorrows are out there,
You feel so sad, so left out
As if you’ve lost your last card.
So softly does your life now go
You lay in a corner all idle all alone,
You’ve lost the magic of those smiles
And the heart beating fast at times.
You’ve been erased from everyone’s life,
You just simple take those pills
And let them eat your life.
humm 
shayd khuch khanay ki baat ho rahi hay
hum bhi khain gay 
Touchy yaar!
Yes it is touchy
are you talking about the flinstones vitamin pills :)
laga ta hay 
tum buhat paytoo ho
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*Originally posted by Rukhsarbibi: *
are you talking about the flinstones vitamin pills :)
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hmm nahi yaar
Re: When the tears fall
Those lines just killed me. Thanks a bunch for sharing it 
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Originally posted by DiYa: *
laga ta hay :) tum buhat paytoo ho
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nahi buss goliyan khanay ki adat ho gaii hay :)
Very good.
…nice:flower1:
hmmm
Re: When the tears fall
this is a really old poem. but, sad that its theme is depressive and life destructive.
read, and brought back the thread.
is DiYa still around?
best,
Dushwari