When I See u ( My words )

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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hi guyz !!

i have written this poem .. i want ur opinion

**all my life waiting the moment
when i will see u
i can not imagine wht i will do
i will huge u between my arms
protect you from any harm
converts ur life into a fantastic charm
i will touch ur soft face
i will have no place
to find such a grace
except ur warm arms
i will look at ur cute eyes
i will say i love u
dont u know
how much i miss u
i will hold u forever
i will never let u leave my arms never
i will print my warm kiss onto ur soft cheeKs
u have given me wings to fly to the mountains peaks
to fly to the skies
to spread between the moon’s light
to blaze the night
when i will see u
i will always hold u tight **

best regards
DodY From Palestine

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Re: When I See u ( My words )

when i see you

i only know

i will always love u ...

What are you reading?
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Re: When I See u ( My words )

Awww this is very heartfelt Dody :) Nice - keep it up!

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Re: When I See u ( My words )

thats so cute...:) but isn't that
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i will huge u between my arms
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suppose to be hug?

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Re: When I See u ( My words )

^ may be his girl friend is huge punjabi girl.. since he goes to shool there.

now stop bothering him.

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Awww this is very heartfelt Dody :) Nice - keep it up!

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thanks phoenix

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thats so cute...:) but isn't that
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i will huge u between my arms

suppose to be hug?
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oppps again i do this mistake :( u know always i do mistake in writing hug as huge :( thanks buddy :)

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^ may be his girl friend is huge punjabi girl.. since he goes to shool there.

now stop bothering him.

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hehehehehe no dear ma gf wasnt that huge :)

thanks

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Re: When I See u ( My words )

very nice poem

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very nice poem

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thanks buddy

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Re: When I See u ( My words )

nice

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Re: When I See u ( My words )

welcome :)