Whats about That gHazal?

Tassneef · June 22, 2002, 1:53pm

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Tabaahi ka apni NishaaN chorh aaye
Warraq-dar-Warraq DaastaaN chorh aaye

Har ik Ajnabi se Patta poocHte haiN
Tujhey Zindagi ham kahaN chorh aaye

Wohi Log jeene ka Funn jaante haiN
Jo Ehsaas-e-Sood-o-ZaiyaaN chorh aaye

Nikal aaye Tanhaa teri Reh’guzar per
BhaTakne ko ham KaarwaaN chorh aaye

(Kaif Muraad-Aabaadi)**

Daiyaar-e-MagHrib se jaane walo!daiyaar-e-Mashriq ke BaasioN ko
Kisi gHareeb-ul-Watan Musafir ki ChaahtoN ka salaam kehnaa
Hamaare Shaam-o-Sehar ka keya Haal poocHte ho ke lam’haa lam’haa
Naseeb in ka bana rahe haiN tumhaare hi Sub’ho Shaam kehnaa

[This message has been edited by Tassneef (edited June 22, 2002).]

_Janat · June 22, 2002, 2:21pm

Wow! very nice! Keep it up ji

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Janat

Tassneef · June 22, 2002, 2:35pm

Shukriaa Janat Sahibaa

Daiyaar-e-MagHrib se jaane walo!daiyaar-e-Mashriq ke BaasioN ko
Kisi gHareeb-ul-Watan Musafir ki ChaahtoN ka salaam kehnaa
Hamaare Shaam-o-Sehar ka keya Haal poocHte ho ke lam’haa lam’haa
Naseeb in ka bana rahe haiN tumhaare hi Sub’ho Shaam kehnaa

XChorniX · June 22, 2002, 8:46pm

veryyyyyyyyyyyy nice tasneef uncle like alwayz

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Nayab · June 23, 2002, 6:16am

humesha ki tarha yeh bhi bohot achee hai

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HeArT_HaCKeR · June 23, 2002, 3:06pm

very nice

i want it that way

asmankirani · June 24, 2002, 6:25pm

wow yeh to appne buhaat ache likhi hai meri gazal to kuch nahi hai keep it up janab

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Tassneef · June 24, 2002, 6:37pm

Arey nahiN nahiNn
yeh emri Ghazal nahIn haai
mere passandeeda Shayar ka kaalaam hai janab ham kahaN aur wo kahaan

Kaif-Muraad Abaadi Sahab ki ghazal hai yeh

KucH Raat Dhaley Dil meiN parcHaaiyaaN roti haiN,
Saaye meiN DarakHtoN ke TanhaaiyaaaN roti haiN

chand_chehra · June 24, 2002, 6:50pm

Nice

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kÃ®BàÎå H@ï

hiraa · July 1, 2002, 10:53pm

zabardast

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God did not promise days without pain, laughter without sorrow, sun without rain but He did promise Strength for the days, comfort for the tears and Light for the way!

Tassneef · July 2, 2002, 12:54am

Shurkiaa chaand chehraa aur Hiraa
Nawazish hai aap ki

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**Wo Ilm de jo kItaaboN se Be-Niaaz kare
Wo Aql de ke do Aalam meiN Sarfraaz kare

Mujhey to is se gHarz hai keh Raazi ho Dilbar
Yeh kaam Qais´ kare ya koi Aiyaaz´ kare

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Lajawab · July 2, 2002, 1:12am

[quote]
Originally posted by Tassneef:

Tabaahi ka apni NishaaN chorh aaye
Warraq-dar-Warraq DaastaaN chorh aaye

Har ik Ajnabi se Patta poocHte haiN
Tujhey Zindagi ham kahaN chorh aaye

Wohi Log jeene ka Funn jaante haiN
Jo Ehsaas-e-Sood-o-ZaiyaaN chorh aaye

Nikal aaye Tanhaa teri Reh'guzar per
BhaTakne ko ham KaarwaaN chorh aaye

(Kaif Muraad-Aabaadi)**

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Now, THIS is poetry...If all the Indian poets died and were reincarnated 7 times, they could not produce a work like this. Awesome...Poetry of the soul...

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