Throughout the history wars have been fought, uncountable, massive amount of humans proudly preferred to give away their lives, on the name of ‘Freedom’ in one way or the other. Nations struggled generations for what’s called a free land, a free country.
It was the month of August, when our folks took their first free breath in the air of Pakistan. A free land, which wasn’t just gifted to us, but sacrifices were given to achieve.
In this thread, u can express what ‘Freedom’ means to u in not more then 30 words, each guppy can submit maximum two entries. The last date to submit ur entries is 10th of August and we will announce the best 3 hopefully on 14th of August based on results compiled by the judges.
I will announce all the judges later when they confirm the availability, but one of them will be CareBear ( wont let her make any excuse ).
Pakistan Paindabad.
Update:
Judging criteria:
Each judge will judge the entries separately.
The entries will be judged on;
a) Theme/Ideology (on the scale of 0-5) *5 being the best
b) How well the idea was put on words. (on the scale of 0-5) *5 being the best.
Awarded score from different judges to each entry will be added and the first 3 entries having the maximum number will be announced.
Competitions are a big turn off for me. Please exclude my reply from the competition. 20 words aren’t enough to write down what freedom means to one, but I’ll just say one thing and keep it short.
**Freedome is when you are not looked upon differently than anyone else. You are accepted by everyone and aren’t looked upon as “someone from middleast”.
Jashn-e-Azadi mubarak to every Pakistani, Pray for Pakistan.
Pakistan Paendabad **
p.s. Here you go jony, I brought it down. If this is not an essay competition and you think 30 words are more than enough to write a “short, to the point, and creative” definition, let’s see what you can say in 30 words
Just 20 words … r u joking? i mean that’s not even one sentance … that short definition of freedom in shikra bhai’s words ends with “it’s” if he limits it to 20 words please consider it being a little longer … like 50 or 100 plez
MSL : my previous reply had around 25-26 words & yet it serves the purpose of conveying the messege. 30 words r enough to make it intresting, short, simple & yet meaningfull.
"Freedom isnt just about getting a piece of land where one can live. Its about eradicating social and cultural bitterness and granting people a sense of pride in their identity."
Freedom is the basic right of every living creature to express itself without influence from external sources.Freedom represents all the good and evil in this world since it allows us to make a choice.
**Freedom is to express your independence with an honour of trust , unity and co-operation.
Freedom is bird who flies high into the sky…with the aim to touch it. **
Freedom means being yourself and not be ashamed of it or regret it. Freedom is respecting yourself and all others, regardless of race, religion, colour or creed.
My dear Jony Bravo;
Freedom is when I can hold you from your collar and demand you to mend ways when you show me your "Moderateness" and you actually obey it without grudge to strike again! :-)
Freedom is not merely the opportunity to do as one pleases; neither is it merely the opportunity to choose between set alternatives. Freedom is, first of all, the chance to formulate the available choices, to argue over them – and then, the opportunity to choose
It s not mine so not competing, just wanted to share thats all
for a hungry - Azaadi means food
for a poor - Azaadi means money
for an illiterate - Azaadi means education
for a handicap - Azaadi means self-dependence