I dont wna be 2 harsh but I think the motifs are the problem because there isnt any cohesion with the rest of the outfit and they looked pasted on...if u know what I mean.I prefer the white by prototype because the shirt is striking and in contrast with the lehenga, everything isn't fighting for attention. The shirt has three patterns, 3 triangular motifs,work on the sides and little motifs plus that neckline isnt helping...
Also the colour combo is like neither a rust nor a red...I guess a complete no from me.
komal, the border will mean your updo will have to be more solid to support it, and your may have to wear it closer to your forehead to give it more support on your head. so you won't be able to pull off those half on, half off romantic styles, if you favour those. Unless of course, you have it made from a chiffon or something?
Also, I think the triangle neckline vs. round depends on what you are going for in terms of your figure. triangle will be slimming and elongating and flatter if you if your chest is small, by complementing it. if you want to appear chestier, or if you have a bustier upper half, round is nice as it widens the shoulders and makes your body appear more round and sensual. The major change needs to be the kaam on it. It's too simple for a neckline and the silver contrasts too much with the fabric, but that means it will compete with the gold jewellery for attention. denser, more detailed work which seems to blend together is nicer near the neck, especially in a gold colour, or a colour that matches the fabric of your dress.
The silver filligree work on the kameez is a totally different style to the gold motifs. I agree with those who say they clash. but this might be picture quality? prototype posted a picture of an outfit that showed the gold motif at the neck going downwards and the same motif at the bottom border but smaller. I like that, and keep the gold bootis all over. Maybe put them on the skirt too for some cohesion? Or, if you like the silver filigree work, have them do it with the filigree work instead of the gold kaam. I just can't see both the gold and silver on at once. Right now the skirt is too plain, needs either sequins or bootis to add some drama to it.
Also, yeah, I like the idea of changing the border of the skirt and dupatta to green to match, where prototype said. What colour is that in the main part of the border? It looks nice.
Also, for sleeves, see-through sleeves with a little bit of kaam on the top near the shoulder to match the kaam on the kameez is really in right now, and a patti border (green maybe to match the skirt and dupatta border) at the hem of the sleeve also looks nice.