What do u guys think about this poem...?

Hey i just wrote this poem out of boredom, lol. And since im still bored i thought id take the time to post it up here, what do u think?

When love goes one way…

When love goes one way,
you feel ur heart lost and astray,
To him/her it belongs, For them it will stay.

When love goes one way…
my heart pains day by day.

Never will he/she understand how I feel,
his/her heart and mine have a special seal.

When love goes one way…
To me he/she has nothing to say.

Why do i love him/her, why do I care?
This love i have for him/her isn’t really fair!

When love goes one way…
‘I Love you’, he/she will never say…
when love goes…one way.

salam

It very very nice….really..But I think u should coose only one…”he” or “she”

Keep writing….& thanks for sharing..

When love goes one way,
you feel ur heart lost and astray,