welcome a new gulabi poet :)

Assalam-O-Alaikum
pyaare (doosto=behnoo + bhaiooo) mein aag pehli post kernay ki galti raha houn ,aap kay forum per.Aap kay forum kou perhta tou akser rehta houn lakin likhne ka yeh pehli baar ittefaq hai.
ous ki birthday hai 14 april kou ;)(jis kay liey yeh poetry hai) , mein nein soucha hai ousee per ousay in alfaaz mein sab kuch bata doun :blush: , aab aap nein insaaf say batana hai kay kaisee poetry hai.
birthday wishes + :wink:

ouroon kou lagte hou tum ghulab ki manind
per such hai yeh, gulab hai tumhari manind

tumhare paas say guzrey tou yon kabhi naheen
yaqeen hai phir bhi mehakte hou tum,gulab ki manind

hou bahaar yaan khizaan khilay raho tum yonhi sadabahar
khoushian karein tumhara tawaf,ghoumtee bersaat ki manind

lay lay ker aae aawas her shub naveed subah ki
khil outhoo tum her subh,oubhertey aftaab ki manind

koi mushkil naan ker sakay gey kabhi tumhein preshan
muskura key ker deina door tareeki, mehtab ki manind

ghazab hou gaa naan gernay deina ashk aankhoun say apni
yeh badal jaante hain,aankhein hain tumhari saagar ki manind

yon tou maati jaat hou aakhir maati mein hi tou jao gay
dua hai hamari roshan hou lehad tumhari, ferdoos ki manind

zindagi apni bhi thee maninde-ferdoos,jab tak naan deikha tha tum kou
aab bun gae hayat aik reegzaar,hum hein bhatakte musafir ki manind

akhyoun kou pyaas hai teri deed ki, seenay mein aag teray ishaq ki
aisay mein tera dedaar,surkh sehra mein gouya nakhlistan ki manind

buhat door reh ker bhi qurb chahta hai yeh haqeer tumhara
issey rakh lo saja key shaakh pey apni, khaar ki manind

berdaasht kernay ka shukria.

Welcome to GS..
and BUHAT KHOOB:flower1:…

Weclome to GS musafir:flower1::slight_smile:

Welcome to GS. :)

And I'll read that poem later :D

Enjoy your stay.

aap loug tareef naan karoo tunqeed hi ker doo , kuch kaho tou.
koi fanni kharabian hi nikaal dou aap loug.mera dil naheen toutey gaa.

Nice and welcome.....

Nice :k:

welcome to GS :slight_smile:

welcome to GS :hula:

and nice poem …:k:

Wellcome to Gs :flower1:

hey! bohat achi ghazal likhi hai :k: i am sure bhabhi ko pasand aaye gee.

Welcome to gupshup :flower1:

welcome and very nice poem.

Tareef our Welcome ka shukria, aab is ka koi titile hi bata doo aap loug.

Re: welcome a new gulabi poet :slight_smile:

bhabii hummmmm bhai Musafir kuch ziyada hi Bhattkay howay ho …
100 baton ki aik baat .. pehlay niakh nama dekhao :smiley: take uss ki roshni main Azad tajziya nigaar aap ke kalam ka tajziay kar saktain. :slight_smile:

Re: Re: welcome a new gulabi poet :)

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*Originally posted by Azad: *

bhabii hummmmm bhai Musafir kuch ziyada hi Bhattkay howay ho ......
100 baton ki aik baat .. pehlay niakh nama dekhao :D take uss ki roshni main Azad tajziya nigaar aap ke kalam ka tajziay kar saktain. :)
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yaar bhatakey houwey tou hum hain issi liey khoud kou bhatka musafir kehtey hain.

   baqi raha nikah , tou ager woh houwa houta tou pher tou khizaan kay sheer perh raha houta, yaan nijaat kay. ;) tareef kis nein kerni thee.

Re: Re: Re: welcome a new gulabi poet :)

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*Originally posted by bhatka_musafir: *

yaar bhatakey houwey tou hum hain issi liey khoud kou bhatka musafir kehtey hain.

   baqi raha nikah , tou ager woh houwa houta tou pher tou khizaan kay sheer perh raha houta, yaan nijaat kay. ;) tareef kis nein kerni thee. 

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ok in that case, woh bhabii nahi hay, so please edit your message .. aghar aap munasib samjhain ... nahi to kon pochta hay :D

rahi baat poetry ki ...... to yahan sub chalta hay :) important thing is you expressed ur self and were kind enough to share it willingly, which is some thing very rare is desi community. so :biggthumb for you ...

haqeeqat yeh hay keh woh jo bhi hay jahan bhi hay, jaisay hi bhi hay, enjoy the feeling of being in love, yeh waqt our yeh ihsaas phir nahi aanay wala.

khulassa e kalam yeh hay keh mohabat ko, jazbon ko lafzon ke tarazo main tolna na sirf zat ki nafi hay balke toheen ameez hud tak ahmaqana herqat hay.

adab

Thanks for understanding the feelings of a AASHIQ.
our haan BHABI kay word kou sensor ker dia hai. ;)

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*Originally posted by bhatka_musafir: *
Thanks for understanding the feelings of a AASHIQ.
our haan BHABI kay word kou sensor ker dia hai. ;)
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yeh to hay, ishq ka hona bhi majboori hay warna itnay dhair saray nikammay kahan jatay, khass kar bechari aadhoori ka kia hota :D

mein tou paidaeshi nakamma bekaar insaan houn.
chalo ishaq kay houney ka aik faida tou hou gaa, koi reason hi mil gae hai kisi kou kehne ki kay hum kou ishaq nakamma ker dia.

ishaq nein lougoon kou badnaam kia , apni waja say yeh badnaam hou gaa. werna ishaq tou bara active ker deita hai baaz dafa.;)