Watan Ke Leay Aik Nazm..

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Re: Watan Ke Leay Aik Nazm..

@Anwaar Qureshi

very nice poem Ahmer …
In my opinion, the poetic rythm of the poem demands a little more contents in the body… I will suggest try to add a bit more.. or perhaps share with us the second part

Thanks alot Anwaar Jee.. I will share the second part inshaAllah in the evening.. provided if meray Abbu mujhe net use kerne dain aur rest ka na kahain