Watan Ke Leay Aik Nazm,
Part 1
Abb Khak-e-Watan Se Ay Logo
Hum Aao Ehed Ye Kertay Hain
Ger Waqt Para, Iss Ki Khatir
Hum Jaan Apni De Daalain Ge
Dunya Main Apni Jannat Hai
Iss Arz-e-Pak Ka Gehwaara
Allah Ko Maan-nay Walay Hum
Iss Arz-e-Pak Ke Rakhwalay
So Dushman-e-Deen Ko Samjha Do
Badd Nazar Na Iss Per Wo Dalay
Ger Uss Ne Nazr-e-Badd Daali
Tou Uss Ka Naam Mita Dain Ge
Iss Arz-e-Pak Ke Rakhwalay
(Ahmer)
Umeed Hai Pasand Aye Gi..
Regards,
PS: Part 2 Mujhe Yaad Nahi, Will Share it Later..
AQ
August 13, 2007, 7:38am
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Re: Watan Ke Leay Aik Nazm..
very nice poem Ahmer ...
In my opinion, the poetic rythm of the poem demands a little more contents in the body... I will suggest try to add a bit more.. or perhaps share with us the second part :)
Re: Watan Ke Leay Aik Nazm..
Thanks alot Anwaar Jee.. I will share the second part inshaAllah in the evening.. provided if meray Abbu mujhe net use kerne dain aur rest ka na kahain
SJ
August 13, 2007, 8:24am
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Re: Watan Ke Leay Aik Nazm..
Its Beautiful Poem Ahmer
app tu bohat zabardust likhtay ho....
Re: Watan Ke Leay Aik Nazm..
Thank You sonia_jee.. :)
Re: Watan Ke Leay Aik Nazm..
nice poem :k:
Re: Watan Ke Leay Aik Nazm..
thank you tum bin :)
Re: Watan Ke Leay Aik Nazm..
Achi hai..
Ahmer agar aap ki abhi tabiyat theek nahin hai puuri tarah tou aap ko rest karrna chahiye..
Re: Watan Ke Leay Aik Nazm..
Khak-e-Watan
Ehed
Gehwaara
Rakhwalay
in ke meaning bateyn pher patah lege gah :)
Re: Watan Ke Leay Aik Nazm..
Thnx Shumaisa..
Jee.. i will take rest surely..
Re: Watan Ke Leay Aik Nazm..
Khak-e-Watan
Ehed
Gehwaara
Rakhwalay
in ke meaning bateyn pher patah lege gah :)
Khak-e-Watan = Watan Ki Matti
Ehed = Promise
Gehwaara = A place to Dwell-in
*Rakhwalay * = Protector / Soldier