Wast-e- Sarma key khunak sham
Neem andhera kamra
Araish-e-Daro Bam
Masgan pah ruka ek aanso
Nigah main kal shub ka manzar
Teray hath main kissi ka hath
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nice one :)
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good
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hammm nice sharing
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bohat khoob!
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very nice Sanan, thanks for sharing:-)
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Jigar Sannan..... Khushbash,
Sirf Great Likh dene se Iss Nazm Ke Saath Insaf Nahi Hoga,
Mukhtasar magar Purasr, Manzar Kashi Dil Main Utar Janewali.. Real Practical, and with all the Pathos, Aisa Laga, yeh main ne kyon nahi likhha.
Meri Jaan...aap ke qalam main sachhaiyee hai, iska istemaal karen, **
**aur yeh interior design aur waal paintings se ziyada, lafzon ke
rangon par dhiyaan den, apna potential, Qalam Par Sarf Karen, Painting par nahi...mujhe manzar kashi se inkaar nahi, magar, Nazm Achhi Ho To Baghair Laces aur Flowers ke Bhi Achhi Lage Gi.
I like you and your potential, and took the liberty of crossing the border,
please do not take it personally.
Good Luck to your pen.
your darwesh.
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*Thx Isra, Gul & Nabiha *
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**Buhat Buhat Shukaria Darwesh g iss qadar daani ka … but telling you honestly that i was in touch with poetry and literature in my college life or when i was paksitan now i’ve left all these things almost 7 years ago and now here i didn’t have any thing to read … Now i’m on site camp where i’ve great piece of mind and now gathering all of memory to collect nice collection of she’ri … i’ve remembered that in my college life all of my friends came to me for some suitable Ashaa’r …
But darwaish u know that “Baghair Doostoon kay hamara zooq nikharna buhat mushkil hay” aab aap logoon ka sath hay to umeed hay kuch zooq bhi acha ho jay ga …anyway thanks for advises and abt manzar nigari yaar it was my wish to be good in composing by using adbobe so i think upto some extnet i m able to use it …
Doobara buhat buhat shukaria aap key muhabat ka and my messsage is gonna be longer & longer so Allah Hafiz till my next post …
… **
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Jigar Sannan... Zindabad,
Yaar Zinda...Shairee aur Manzarnigari Baqi... Cheers.
darwesh.
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Buhat hi zabardast as usual Ab to Aadat si ho gai hai
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*Yaara Darwesh G Aab Aap nay mujhay majbore kar dia Qalam say dobara rishta jornay par *............
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Jgar Sannan...Zindabaad,
Agar Yeh Sach Hai, To Meri Darweshi kisi ke to kaam Aayee, Marhaba.
Jigar likkho aur Zaroor Likhho.... Meri Nazm Ka Yeh Band Tumhare Naam:
" JO QALAM ABHI SALAMAT HAI,
** JO SUKHAN MAIN KUCH SADAQAT HAI,**
** YAHI ZINDAGI KA HASIL HAI,**
** YAHI HAQEEQAT HAI...... "**
( For full poem " GHANEEMAT HAI..." go to 'Best Of Darwesh in **
** Shorai Gupshup)
I am waiting for your next Poem....cheers.
darwesh
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nice sharing.....as usual.....thnx!
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Thanks **Reet G **for ur encouragement ..... aur aap full time qari bun chuki hain iss forum key ..... keep sharing and encouraging ......
Doosta Darvesh : I'll read all of ur poem in my liesure bcoz i wan to feel all of ur poems ........
Re: Wast-e- Sarma key khunak sham
buuuuuuuuhat hi khoub :)
thx 4 sharing
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