Hi everyone,
I am here again, just to add something small to this board that I really like. Hope you like it.
~ Dasht-e-tanhai mein ae jaan-e-jahaan larza hain,
Teri aawaz ke saaye, tere honton ke saraab
Dasht-e-tanhai mein doori ke khash-o-khaak taale,
Khil rahe hain tere pehloo ke saman aur gulaab
Uth rahi hai kahin qurbat se teri saans ki aanch,
Apni khushu mein sulaghti hui madham madham
Doore ufaq par chamakti hui qatra qatra,
Gir rahi hai teri dildaar nazar ki shabnam
Is qadar pyaar se ae jaan-e-jahaan rakha hai,
Dil ke rukhsaar pe is waqt teri yaad ne haath
Yoon gumaan hota hai gharche hai abhi subh-e-firaaq
Dhal gayaa hijr ka din, aa bhi gayi wasl ki raat…
Hope you liked it.
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~ Mehshar mein le gayi thi, tabiyat ki saagi
Lekin bare khuloos se hum laut aaye hain…
one of my fav shair
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jus love it
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~ ~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~
hanie
January 26, 2002, 8:42pm
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zabardast hai
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like it
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ungaliyaan uthe ghie sookhein howe baloon kie taraf,
choorion par kaie tanz kiye djae ghe…
i just love this … magar iss ko iqbal bano nay chaar chaand lagga deeiay ga karr… bohat khoob.. thanks for posting..
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mairay dill mairay mussafir
Zabardast!!!
i love this ghazal…
welcome to the poetry forum, Jaan-e-Ghazal
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RahGeeR
January 28, 2002, 12:56pm
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nice work
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wasal Ki shab na jany kion israr thaa Un Ko jany per… waqat sey phaly doob gaey taroon nay bare danai ki ..urtay urtay ass ka panchii door ufaq main doob geya .. rootey rootey bath gae awaaz kese sodaii ke
Irfan Ismail