waqt.......ek choti si koshish

[chand_chehra]

waqt thamta nahi ehsas kay bandhan say yeh woh afreet hai jispay bandish nai dali jati

[WiseGuy]

Re: waqt…ek choti si koshish

*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

waqt thamta nahi ehsas kay bandhan say yeh woh afreet hai jispay bandish nai dali jati

Alay wah Chandoo jee kia baat hai aapke, aap bhi hamari suf main aa gayeen.

:k: bohat acha shair hai.

bilkul theek kaha, waqt tu rokay nahee rukta yeh tu apni chaal chalta hee chala jata hai. bas waqt kay saath saath jo chalay wahee kaamyaab hai, jaisa keh shair nay farmaya.
Chalne waalay nikal gaye haiN
Tehray jo zara kuchal gaye haiN.

[Koyal]

V nice sher chand g hamin tu pata he nahi is side per barey barey shuu’ra janam lay chukay hain hey koyal kis dunia main khoie ho …v nice koshish…:k:

[chand_chehra]

Re: Re: waqt…ek choti si koshish

*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Alay wah Chandoo jee kia baat hai aapke, aap bhi hamari suf main aa gayeen.

:k: bohat acha shair hai.

ap ki suf boly to ???

[chand_chehra]

*Originally posted by Koyal: *
V nice sher chand g hamin tu pata he nahi is side per barey barey shuu’ra janam lay chukay hain hey koyal kis dunia main khoie ho …v nice koshish…:k:

poet janam lakar budhy bhi hogye aur ap ko abhi tak pata hi nai chala

[WiseGuy]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

poet janam lakar budhy bhi hogye aur ap ko abhi tak pata hi nai chala ;)
[/QUOTE]

Jee eik thay Baba e Urdu aur eik aap haiN. Urdu kay daman maiN faqat iskay siwa kia hai. :)

[WiseGuy]

Re: Re: Re: waqt…ek choti si koshish

*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

ap ki suf boly to ???

Hum say kia poochti ho aap, suno zamana kia kehta hai.

[Azad]

humm

[chand_chehra]

*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Jee eik thay Baba e Urdu aur eik aap haiN. Urdu kay daman maiN faqat iskay siwa kia hai.

bab-e-urdu kon thay

[chand_chehra]

Re: Re: Re: Re: waqt.......ek choti si koshish

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Hum say kia poochti ho aap, suno zamana kia kehta hai. :D
[/QUOTE]

zamany ko sunny ka time nahi hai :p

[Capricorn]

Re: waqt.......ek choti si koshish

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

waqt thamta nahi ehsas kay bandhan say
yeh woh afreet hai jispay bandish nai dali jati
[/QUOTE]

Counter-shair:-

"Hiii andaaz tere rukne ka,
waqt ko bhee ruka ruka dekha"

Teree aankhon mein hum ne kia dekha,
kabhee qatil kabhee khuda dekha.

PS:- Waqt tham sakta hai agar chaho to ;)

[High-Tech]

Re: waqt…ek choti si koshish

:rotato:

[chand_chehra]

Re: Re: waqt…ek choti si koshish

*Originally posted by High-Tech: *
:rotato:

[High-Tech]

Re: Re: Re: waqt…ek choti si koshish

*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

:rotato:

[asmy]

hmm baat patay ki kahi hay chanda
khush rahen

[High-Tech]

:stupid:

[chand_chehra]

*Originally posted by High-Tech: *
:stupid:

[Pramod]

Re: waqt.......ek choti si koshish

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

waqt thamta nahi ehsas kay bandhan say
yeh woh afreet hai jispay bandish nai dali jati
[/QUOTE]

Good one , Chand jii...

[chand_chehra]

Re: Re: waqt.......ek choti si koshish

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *

Good one , Chand jii...
[/QUOTE]

welcome back pramod gi :)

kaha gaieb rahay itna arsa ???

[Pramod]

Re: Re: Re: waqt.......ek choti si koshish

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

welcome back pramod gi :)

kaha gaieb rahay itna arsa ???
[/QUOTE]

Shukriya, Chand jii...
Aap log mujhe yaad rakhte haiN..ye jaan kar bahot khushii hoti hai....
I will try to be regular now....