Waqia

Uss sey ulfet key dawey ko sanam banaya tha hum ney raat bher
Kiya thee khaber, wohh ajnabi zaat thee bey khaber raat bher

Dil ka asman shafaf tha, iss mey jhilmil khaloos key sitarey they raat bher
Maloom nahee kahan ka tha wohh chaand, aur kahan paree iss kee chandni raat bher

Nawa deiteye tow kiya baeed, wohh na mil paya jeb raat bher
Sotch ka samender hey aur wohh lagao kee tarp sey dua kerta hey raat bher

Bey ja apni kahee baat ko jultlaya kiya, rootha setch-shebd sey wohh raat bher
Achanek jeb tota ashiyan, iss perr karee gharee thee seb raat bher

Uss roz, adavet mey nishani milee teiree unjaan hasti kee raat bher
Bohet afsos key tu pa ker kho beitha khood ko iss raat bher

Dilasoon kee bazm mey munfarid laga teira rookha pun raat bher
Malal nahee baad key sal ha sal ka, leikin aik gheiree kask pae raat bher

note: Raat bher is the symbolic temporal passage of the sequence of events
the poem’s kafiya is inpired by AQ’s poem he wrote sometime ago and shared at GS when Amal was still around. thanks,

Dushwari

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w0w.. Dushwari.. it is gr8 too see a long beher wali poetry from ur side.. it is beautiful..

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thanks, redidentity.

what does it mean by beher wali poem?
best,
Dushwari

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it means.. long rhyme wali..

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thanks, Ahmer. i know now what long behar means.
best,
Dushwari

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Uss sey ulfet key dawey ko sanam banaya tha hum ney raat bher

naya andaz mashallah

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it is true, Azad.

originality and honesty, unfortunately... never always gets acknowledged to whom it is offered, & directed, free home.

best,
Dushwari