kabi waqt mile to aa jao
hum jheel kinarey ja bethain
tum apne sukh ki baat karo
hum apne dukh ki baat karen
aur un lamhon ki baat karen
jo sung tumhareybeet gaye
aur Ehde khizan ki nazar huwey
in sabz rutoon k daman men
hum pyaar ki khushboo mehkaen
in bikhray sabz nazaron ko
hum aankhon men tasveer karen
phir apne pyaar k jadoo se
hum lamhon ko jageer karen
kabhi waqt mile to aa jao
hum jheel kinarey ja bethien…
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Buhat Khoobsurat Nazm Hai Tehreem.. Weldone..
Re: waqat miley to aa jao
thanks naam keya hai aap ka
Re: waqat miley to aa jao
Tehreem.. Mera Naam AHMER hai.. :)
Re: waqat miley to aa jao
Tehreem.. Mera Naam AHMER hai.. :)
thanks alot jo naam bata deya warna itna mushkil RED IDENtity lekha he nahi jata tha
Re: waqat miley to aa jao
:)
Re: waqat miley to aa jao
boht khobsorat ...:)
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great sis!!!!
bohat khoob nazam hai!!!
:)
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very nice good job:)
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thanks alot freinds iam happy u all like this
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tahreem saheba, kya kehne! bahot dilkash!
Re: waqat miley to aa jao
beautiful tehreem
parah k foran he zehen me kuch ban gaya to yahin post kardya
don mind plz...
kabhi waqt mila to ajana
baithay hain wahin pay
aj bhi hum
jiss mor pay hum ko chorgayay
sapnay saray torr gayay
kitab-e-zndagi say goya
warq-e-mohabbat morr gayay
Re: waqat miley to aa jao
beautiful tehreem
parah k foran he zehen me kuch ban gaya to yahin post kardya don mind plz...
kabhi waqt mila to ajana baithay hain wahin pay aj bhi hum jiss mor pay hum ko chorgayay sapnay saray torr gayay kitab-e-zndagi say goya warq-e-mohabbat morr gayay
bohat khoob dead soul or naraz kyun main bohat khush hoi k aap ney merey thread main kuch kaha ab kuch aap k naam umeed hai pasand aye gaa
*Hum ney soch rakha hey
chahey dil ki har khawaish
zindagi ki aankhon se
ashk ban key beh jaye
chahey ab makeenon par
ghar ki sari deewarain
chat samait gir jain
aur bey-mukaddar hum
is badan key malbey mein
khud hi kioon na dab jain
tum se kuch nahin kehna *
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bohat khoob dead soul or naraz kyun main bohat khush hoi k aap ney merey thread main kuch kaha ab kuch aap k naam umeed hai pasand aye gaa
*Hum ney soch rakha hey * *chahey dil ki har khawaish * *zindagi ki aankhon se * *ashk ban key beh jaye * *chahey ab makeenon par * *ghar ki sari deewarain * *chat samait gir jain * *aur bey-mukaddar hum * *is badan key malbey mein * *khud hi kioon na dab jain * *tum se kuch nahin kehna *
buhat navazish tehreem
fav ghazal me say 2 sher app ki nazar
Dard Kia Hota Hai Batayen Gain Kisi Rooz
Kamal Ki Ghazal Tum Ko Sunaeyn Gain Kisi Rooz
Thi Un Ki Zidd K Main Jaoon Un Ko Mananay
Mujh Ko Yeh Veham Tha Woh Bolaeyn Gain Kisi Rooz
Re: waqat miley to aa jao
Excellent Poem Tahreem ji!
Aur deadsoul......
Thi Un Ki Zidd K Main Jaoon Un Ko Mananay
Mujh Ko Yeh Veham Tha Woh Bolaeyn Gain Kisi Rooz!!
Wah kya baat ki hai....mera ko choo ker gaya hai yeh shayr!!!<!-- / message -->
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beautiful piece of poetry again thanks alot dead soul
*Dard Kia Hota Hai Batayen Gain Kisi Rooz
Kamal Ki Ghazal Tum Ko Sunaeyn Gain Kisi Rooz
Thi Un Ki Zidd K Main Jaoon Un Ko Mananay
Mujh Ko Yeh Veham Tha Woh Bolaeyn Gain Kisi Rooz*
**
humeri nazar karney k leye bohat shukareya .<!-- / message -->
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Excellent Poem Tahreem ji! Aur deadsoul...... Thi Un Ki Zidd K Main Jaoon Un Ko Mananay Mujh Ko Yeh Veham Tha Woh Bolaeyn Gain Kisi Rooz!! Wah kya baat ki hai....mera ko choo ker gaya hai yeh shayr!!!<!-- / message -->
thanks MG