Swera
November 13, 2003, 2:32pm
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Waqat ko ronay per majboor kiya hay maiN nay
zindagi ko shab-e-ashoora kiya hay maiN nay
Musif-e-ehad! yahi jurm huwa hay hum say
tera haar fesala mazoor kiya hay hum nay
hum charaghooN ko samdar maiN gira ay hiaN
hood hi is shehar ko benoor kiya hay hum nay
atay jatay logooN maiN tujay dhoondatay haiN
khood ko yak is kaam pay mamoor kiya hay maiN nay
ya jo ghazlaiN hiaN ya ghazlaiN to nahiN hiaN Nasir*
apni tanhai ko mashoor kiya hay maiN nay
Mujhay talash karaiN gay nei rootooN maiN loog
maiN gehri dhoond maiN lipta huwa jazeera hooN
Wah kitna zulam kiya hai aap ne apne ooper..keep it up :k:
Swera
November 13, 2003, 3:10pm
3
U mean zulm kartiN rahooN?
BTW, Thanks:-)
Is say acha naheen ke koi aur kare, banda (bandee in ur case) khud par hee zulam dhaata/dhaatee rahay?
You are welcome :k:
apny ap pey zulam karna bhi kisi ka kam hey :)
khilta kisi per kiun marey dil ka mamla
shairooN key intakhab ney ruswa kiya mujhey :)
Re: Waqat ko ronay per …
Originally posted by Swera: *
Waqat ko ronay per majboor kiya hay maiN nay
zindagi ko shab-e-ashoora kiya hay maiN nay
Musif-e-ehad! yahi jurm huwa hay hum say
tera haar fesala mazoor kiya hay hum nay
hum charaghooN ko samdar maiN gira ay hiaN
hood hi is shehar ko benoor kiya hay hum nay
atay jatay logooN maiN tujay dhoondatay haiN
khood ko yak is kaam pay mamoor kiya hay maiN nay
ya jo ghazlaiN hiaN ya ghazlaiN to nahiN hiaN Nasir
apni tanhai ko mashoor kiya hay maiN nay
Mujhay talash karaiN gay nei rootooN maiN loog
maiN gehri dhoond maiN lipta huwa jazeera hooN
swera u r going perfect:k::k:
keep it up:hug:
Swera
November 15, 2003, 9:19pm
8
Thanks, WiseGuy.
HC, Welcome 2 GH & thanks…
awwwww:hug: GKK…
Thanksss
No one’s perfect na…
arfin99
November 19, 2003, 12:12am
11
good work swera :k: Keep it up
Daagh
November 19, 2003, 12:28am
12
bahot hi khoob Swera jee
keep up the good work
kaash mein bhi likh sakta i tried sachchiiiiiiiiii aap naraz na hona:(
Swera
November 19, 2003, 4:01pm
13
I am NOT talking 2 u… No eidi for u either…
Azad
November 19, 2003, 9:48pm
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maiN gehri dhoond maiN lipta huwa jazeera hooN
Wahh…
Gihri dhoond main liptta howa
kia baat hay
:k:
Swera
November 21, 2003, 8:58pm
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Thanks...Philanthrope, shoki & AsSweetAs
:)