waqaat

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 22, 2002, 3:43am

waqaat ketna ghuzar gaya Janaa
tere zulfoon ke cahoon ko cohea hoae
haan magar phir bhi be-khailee mein
jub khabhi tera naam likhata hoon
ungalian kanp kanp jatee hain

amir bin ail

CoOL_NetizeN · December 22, 2002, 4:31am

Very Nice

per urdu roman mein spelling mistakes hein jis kee waja say perhnay mein mushkil horahee hay

HeArT_HaCKeR · December 22, 2002, 5:48pm

:k:

arifnawaz1 · December 22, 2002, 6:02pm

Zabardust :k::k::k:

ShaRaRa · December 22, 2002, 6:08pm

nice:k:

Azad · December 22, 2002, 6:09pm

ghazal kisi ke
intekhab acha hay .. thanks for sharing

aik baat pochain ghar bora na lagay.

humra to dil un ka khayal anay say pehlay hi dhaRakna bhol jata hay... aap dil ko sanbhal kar angliyon kay kanpnay par iktefa kaisay kar layti hain?

Capricorn · December 22, 2002, 6:24pm

Re: waqaat

:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 23, 2002, 2:33am

thanks a lot
coOl~NetizeN
HeArt heCKeR
arifnawaz
ShaRaRa
Azad
Capricorn

coOl~NetizeN i am really sorry if there is any mistake but i can’t see any:confused:

Azad mera dil to khabhi bhi sanbahla nahi:(

Azad · December 23, 2002, 5:17am

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Azad mera dil to khabhi bhi sanbahla nahi
[/QUOTE]

Phir theek hay

Dilsay · December 23, 2002, 6:25am

Nice

Very nice... thanks for sharing

Dilsay · December 23, 2002, 2:53pm

Azad dil

Azad dil kahan sambahaltay hain… koshish karain… **Shiyad… Magar Shiyad…

Phir usi rah guzar par shiyad
Hum kabhi mil sakain magar shiyad**

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 23, 2002, 9:52pm

thanks dilsay pasand karne ka:flower1: