wahaN bhi aa gaye akHir jahaN rasayi na thi

chand_chehra · November 28, 2002, 12:11am

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woh humsafar tha magar us say humnawaayi na thi
keh dhoop cHayoN ka alam raha,judaai na thi

na apna ranj na auroN ka dukh,na tera malal
sHab`e firaq kabhi hum nay yuN ganwayi na thi

mohabbatoN ka safar is tarha bhi guzra tha
sHikasta dil thay musaafir sHikasta paayi na thi

adawateiN thiN,tagHaful tha,ranjisHeiN thiN
bicHaRhnay walay maiN sab kucH tha,bewafaayi na thi

bicHaRhtay waqt un aankhoN maiN thi humari gHazal
gHazal bhi woh jo kisi ko abhi sunayi na thi

kabhi yeh haal keh donoN maiN yakdili thi bohat
kabhi yeh marhala jaisay keh asHnayi na thi

ajeeb hoti hay rah`e sukHan bhi dekh Naseer
wahaN bhi aa gaye akHir jahaN rasayi na thi

arifnawaz1 · November 28, 2002, 12:17am

Xcellent !
Keep it up :)

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 28, 2002, 12:58am

wow nice:k:

Khushee · November 28, 2002, 2:19am

wah... really nice

Jaan_Lewaa · November 28, 2002, 3:20am

bhut achay:k:

Muddi · November 28, 2002, 3:25am

Re: wahaN bhi aa gaye akHir jahaN rasayi na thi

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

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woh humsafar tha magar us say humnawaayi na thi
keh dhoop cHayoN ka alam raha,judaai na thi

na apna ranj na auroN ka dukh,na tera malal
sHab`e firaq kabhi hum nay yuN ganwayi na thi

mohabbatoN ka safar is tarha bhi guzra tha
sHikasta dil thay musaafir sHikasta paayi na thi

adawateiN thiN,tagHaful tha,ranjisHeiN thiN
bicHaRhnay walay maiN sab kucH tha,bewafaayi na thi

bicHaRhtay waqt un aankhoN maiN thi humari gHazal
gHazal bhi woh jo kisi ko abhi sunayi na thi

kabhi yeh haal keh donoN maiN yakdili thi bohat
kabhi yeh marhala jaisay keh asHnayi na thi

ajeeb hoti hay rah`e sukHan bhi dekh Naseer
wahaN bhi aa gaye akHir jahaN rasayi na thi
[/QUOTE]

Great CC;)

superglue · November 28, 2002, 3:51am

adawateiN thiN,tagHaful tha,ranjisHeiN thiN
bicHaRhnay walay maiN sab kucH tha,bewafaayi na thi

:)
very nice...
yehi to sara fasana hai.. bewafai ka.....

Lamhay · November 28, 2002, 6:21am

Chando v nice thanks 4 sharing!

Capricorn · November 28, 2002, 10:22am

kabhi yeh haal keh donoN maiN yakdili thi bohat
kabhi yeh marhala jaisay keh asHnayi na thi

:k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · November 28, 2002, 10:39am

Very Nice Chanda, Thanks for sharing:)

NikamiJano · November 28, 2002, 1:27pm

Re: wahaN bhi aa gaye akHir jahaN rasayi na thi

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

**

bicHaRhtay waqt un aankhoN maiN thi humari gHazal
gHazal bhi woh jo kisi ko abhi sunayi na thi

kabhi yeh haal keh donoN maiN yakdili thi bohat
kabhi yeh marhala jaisay keh asHnayi na thi

ajeeb hoti hay rah`e sukHan bhi dekh Naseer
wahaN bhi aa gaye akHir jahaN rasayi na thi
[/QUOTE]

V nice chando g thanks 4 sharin...:)

ARSH · November 28, 2002, 3:32pm

Bohat KhOOb…

Pramod · November 28, 2002, 6:38pm

na apna ranj na auroN ka dukh,na tera malal
sHab`e firaq kabhi hum nay yuN ganwayi na thi

adawateiN thiN,tagHaful tha,ranjisHeiN thiN
bicHaRhnay walay maiN sab kucH tha,bewafaayi na thi

these two shers are simply beautiful.
thanks for sharing it Chand ji...

chand_chehra · November 30, 2002, 7:18am

thanks every1

Muddi · November 30, 2002, 8:42am

Hey CC yeh every main say 1 kun hai;)

_Masoom_Muskaan · December 1, 2002, 10:10am

boht khob:crying: :k:

_kashish · December 1, 2002, 11:33am

adawateiN thiN,tagHaful tha,ranjisHeiN thiN
bicHaRhnay walay maiN sab kucH tha,bewafaayi na thi

bicHaRhtay waqt un aankhoN maiN thi humari gHazal
gHazal bhi woh jo kisi ko abhi sunayi na thi

excellent selection Chaand ji :)

Gemini_the_Great · December 1, 2002, 10:03pm

zabardast chandooo :)

nikii · December 1, 2002, 11:12pm

zaberdast chand siso :k:
thxs 4 sharing

chand_chehra · December 2, 2002, 12:07am

hai koi some1 special

ajkal apki ankh main koi garbar lagti hai