..... Wafaa Gumaan

Zamil · November 19, 2006, 9:28pm

GHAZAL

**Is mein dawaa gumaan hai, is mein shafaa gumaan **
**Ye ishq hai k jis mein hai yaaro wafaa gumaan **

**Paaya tujhe to phir bhi na aaya sukooN mujhe **
**Har shakhs par raqeeb ka hone lagaa gumaan **

**KucH is qadar haqeeqatoN se aashna tha wo **
**Main ne kahaa, “milein ge!”, to us ne kahaa, “gumaan!” **

**Ham ko saraab bhi to koi na lubhaa sakaa **
**Tha aaisa kaun jis pe k hota teraa gumaan ! **

**Har soo yahaaN pe talkh haqaa’iq they raah-zan **
**Har gaam, har ik moR pe luT-ta rahaa gumaan **

August 2005

AQ · November 19, 2006, 11:39pm

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What a beautiful piece of poetry..

Simply amazing!!!!

each and every sher is just marvellous!!!

One can certainly relate to many things here....

Zamil Sahib: Keep writing. You are an asset to this place...

P_G · November 20, 2006, 3:50pm

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true one

sunny_nicky · November 20, 2006, 7:23pm

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Ham ko saraab bhi to koi na lubhaa sakaa
Tha aaisa kaun jis pe k hota teraa gumaan !

nicee

soni_kudi420 · November 22, 2006, 8:49am

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nice

soni_kudi420 · November 22, 2006, 8:50am

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cool

soni_kudi420 · November 22, 2006, 8:50am

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really nice yaar

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · November 22, 2006, 12:18pm

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Saal purani ghazal post kar di , aap logoN ko new poems likhney pe paabandi hey

Amal · November 22, 2006, 12:45pm

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Khoobsoorat tehreer hey Zamil :k: Thanx for sharing it with us

P_G · November 22, 2006, 1:52pm

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Saal purani ghazal post kar di , aap logoN ko new poems likhney pe paabandi hey

[/QUOTE]

jo saal pehlay nahi thay un kay ley to new hee hay na : )

mahamkhan · November 23, 2006, 10:30am

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nice gahzal.....zamil gee....

Jhuki_Nigahein · November 24, 2006, 4:19pm

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wah buhat hi khoob :)

Zamil · November 25, 2006, 9:52pm

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*Bohat bohat shukria janab :) *
*Aap ki khush-nazari hai varna ham kya likhte hain jeeeee :) *

Zamil · November 25, 2006, 10:09pm

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:)

Zamil · November 25, 2006, 10:31pm

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*Thankoo :) *

Zamil · November 25, 2006, 10:35pm

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Ye to wohi baat hui ba-qaul Daagh ;
Yaad aati hai unhein dam-ba-dam ik baat naee
Roz aata hai mere khat ka jawaab eik par eik

**Thanx alottt for liking **

Zamil · November 25, 2006, 10:45pm

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Jis ne pehle nahi paRhi us k liye to naee hi hui na mohtarma. Jo bhi lafz kaaghaz pe likh dia wo puraana ho jaata hai agle lamhe. Agar puraani shaairy pasand nahi to phir is dunia mein jitni bhi kitaabein, jis bhi shaair ki hain, un sab ko jalva dijiye.
Waise date mention karne se likhe hue k naye ya puraane hone ka pata nahi chalta coz date ghalat bhi ho sakti hai. Aur jo jis k haal pe poora utre, us k liye wohi naya hai.
Thanx for visiting.

Zamil · November 25, 2006, 10:49pm

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BaRi nawaazish janaab

Zamil · November 25, 2006, 10:50pm

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Thanx Maham g :)

Zamil · November 25, 2006, 10:52pm

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Bohat hi shukria :) :)