wafa

umeed24 · July 31, 2003, 7:53am

wada kiya hai, tu
wafa bhee nibhani hogi
ab jidher bhee tu jai ga
udher hi meri rawani hogi
akele chalai hain
kya kabhee,
samandar se kinare
juda agar, hum tum hue
tu kya
ajjub kahani hogi !

by umeed:flower2:

amirbilal · July 31, 2003, 8:08am

so nice

kahani to ajab hi ho gi

umeed24 · July 31, 2003, 8:21am

thx amirbilal:)

Capricorn · July 31, 2003, 8:27am

:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 31, 2003, 4:19pm

beautiful

beautiful :k: boht achay,.. :k::k::k:

system · July 31, 2003, 8:59pm

zidee · August 1, 2003, 2:05am

umeed, very nice! two thumbs up!

umeed24 · August 1, 2003, 8:47am

thx zidee, KhamoshNigahein, HeArT HaCKeR, Capricorn and others for reading my peoms and appreciating them whole heartedly, u guys r so nice:)

SuraJ · August 1, 2003, 9:17am

umeed pey kaaim hai yeh duniya usey kehna....

nice one umeed keep it up

umeed24 · August 1, 2003, 10:13am

umeed par hi tu qaim hai abhee tuk:) ,thx

BeWaQooF · August 1, 2003, 10:23am

Had Kar Di Aap Ne Aap To Zabardasti Kar Rahi Ho

Anyway Very Well Said UmeeD Keep Writing

All The Best

umeed24 · August 1, 2003, 10:38am

zabardasti ki kya baat hai bhalla:) , bus jab wada karo tu pura karo aur kisi ka itemad kabhee nahi toro,kya samjhe?,thx and take care:flower2: