vo Kehti hai main pairron par tumhara bakht likhooN gi

Koyal · July 1, 2008, 4:26am

vo Kehti hai maiN apney Dil meiN Ik deewar Uthaon gi
main kehta hooN k main Iss baat ka matlub nahi samjha

vo Kehti hai main aankhon mein koi sehra basaa’oon gi
main Kehta hooN k bee’nayii Jhulas jaa’ey gi aisy tu

vo Kehti hai main pairron par tumhara bakht likhooN gi
main Kehta hooN pairron se adawat hai tumhein koi

vo Kehti hai main pani par tera chehra bana’oon gi
main Kehta hoon mujhay lagta hai tera dil b pani hai

vo mujh Se oochti hai tum kisay mujrim samjhtey ho
main Kehta hooN usay Jo dard k maani na samjha Ho

vo mujh se poochi hai jhoot aur sachayian kya haiN
main kehta hoon k niyyat aur natayej ki pazeerayii

vo mujh se poochti hahi sab se pehley kon rehta tha
maiN kehta hoon k andaza ya mafrooza he mumkiN hai

vo mujh se poochti hai koN reh Ja’ey ga duniya meiN
main kehta hooN k bilkul Ik naa’ey aur ajnabi duniya

vo mujh se poochti hai, Junglon mein koN rehta hai
maiN kehta hoon vohi Jo shehar meiN rehney se kha’yef hai

muddii · July 1, 2008, 4:53am

Very very nice choice as usual:)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 1, 2008, 6:32am

Re: vo Kehti hai main pairron par tumhara bakht likhooN gi

Jungle meiN tou hum bhi rehtey heiN lekin hum shehr meiN rehney sey bhi khaaif nahi
wahaaN karaaey zeyada hotey heiN jungle meiN kam:cb:

Ali_2 · July 1, 2008, 6:40am

Re: vo Kehti hai main pairron par tumhara bakht likhooN gi

Nice as usual :k:

PS. sawaal buhat poochti hai

_dArd · July 1, 2008, 12:24pm

Re: vo Kehti hai main pairron par tumhara bakht likhooN gi

**vo mujh se poochti hai, Junglon mein koN rehta hai
maiN kehta hoon vohi Jo shehar meiN rehney se kha'yef **

**Well Said **

bOht KhOob
Umda Sharing

rida_ali · July 1, 2008, 1:49pm

Re: vo Kehti hai main pairron par tumhara bakht likhooN gi

beautiful esp the scond last

Precious_Khan · July 1, 2008, 1:54pm

Re: vo Kehti hai main pairron par tumhara bakht likhooN gi

Dono Hee Sahi keh Rahay Hain

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 1, 2008, 5:23pm

ncie one koyal G

Shab-e-Hijar · July 1, 2008, 9:32pm

Koyal:

vo Kehti hai maiN apney Dil meiN Ik deewar Uthaon gi main kehta hooN k main Iss baat ka matlub nahi samjha

vo Kehti hai main aankhon mein koi sehra basaa'oon gi main Kehta hooN k bee'nayii Jhulas jaa'ey gi aisy tu

vo Kehti hai main pairron par tumhara bakht likhooN gi main Kehta hooN pairron se adawat hai tumhein koi

vo Kehti hai main pani par tera chehra bana'oon gi main Kehta hoon mujhay lagta hai tera dil b pani hai

vo mujh Se oochti hai tum kisay mujrim samjhtey ho main Kehta hooN usay Jo dard k maani na samjha Ho

vo mujh se poochi hai jhoot aur sachayian kya haiN main kehta hoon k niyyat aur natayej ki pazeerayii

vo mujh se poochti hahi sab se pehley kon rehta tha maiN kehta hoon k andaza ya mafrooza he mumkiN hai

vo mujh se poochti hai koN reh Ja'ey ga duniya meiN main kehta hooN k bilkul Ik naa'ey aur ajnabi duniya

vo mujh se poochti hai, Junglon mein koN rehta hai maiN kehta hoon vohi Jo shehar meiN rehney se kha'yef hai

One of my most favorites.... beautiful :)

Aryaan · July 1, 2008, 10:34pm

Re: vo Kehti hai main pairron par tumhara bakht likhooN gi

Very Nice Koyal..:k:

Koyal · July 8, 2008, 4:47am

sahi hai na sawal zaroor poochnay chaiey warna baad maiN

Koyal · July 8, 2008, 4:48am

tu post keoN nahi ki pahlay

Koyal · July 8, 2008, 4:49am

muncho · July 8, 2008, 3:03pm

Re: vo Kehti hai main pairron par tumhara bakht likhooN gi

uffff!!!

Shab-e-Hijar · July 8, 2008, 6:31pm

koyal jano check this thread out ye poem 47 pages ki hai aur mane aur ghazal nay pori post ki thi

http://www.paklinks.com/gs/intikhaab/268693-mohabbat-chup-nahi-rehti.html

Koyal · July 8, 2008, 7:34pm

shabo is maiN tu wo blti ja rehi kah tu thora rehi lakin dewar b nahi uthaei us ne bol bol kar rehi

Shab-e-Hijar · July 8, 2008, 7:38pm

ap nay 47 pages parhay hain :aq:

Koyal · July 9, 2008, 4:22am

G parhay is leay tu kaha