Vo Jagga Bata Jahan Par Khuda Nahi...

*Sharaab peenay day Masjid mein baiT kar
YaN vo jagga bata jaha par Khuda nahi

Masjid Khuda ka ghar hai - peenay ki jagga nahi
Kaafir kay dil mein ja - vahaN par Khuda nahi

Kaafir kay dil se aya hu main ye dekh kar
Khuda mujood hai vahaN par ussay pata nahi

Khuda to mujood dunya mein har jagga
Tu Jannat mein ja - vahaN peena manna nahi

Peeta hu ghum-e-duniya bhulanay k liye Saki
Jannat mein kaunsa ghum hai - is liye vahaN peenay mein maza nahi*


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Re: Vo Jagga Bata Jahan Par Khuda Nahi...

sab ne bahane bana liye.

PS: welcome to poetry forum MM

Re: Vo Jagga Bata Jahan Par Khuda Nahi...

Shayer hazraat shair kehnay mein tamaam hudood paar kyun ker jaatey hain?!?!
Khuda ka naam ghalat ghlaat tareeqay se use kertay hain.

Re: Vo Jagga Bata Jahan Par Khuda Nahi...

sho'ara ko Quran main issi liye condemn kia gaya ke wo jo kehte hain wo karte nahin

Re: Vo Jagga Bata Jahan Par Khuda Nahi...

Durust.

Re: Vo Jagga Bata Jahan Par Khuda Nahi...

welcome to Poetry forum, MM! :)

it's again an effort to associate ash'aar to 'allaamah Iqbaal which aren't his.

Re: Vo Jagga Bata Jahan Par Khuda Nahi...

mujhay to lagta hai yeh in mein se kisi k bhi shehr nahin hain

Re: Vo Jagga Bata Jahan Par Khuda Nahi…

:konfused:

I dono if they are or aren’t
Just something someone shared with me, so I thought i’d share it here :smack:

Thanks for the welcomes. not my first time here tho lol… I’m a returning customer :smiley:

Re: Vo Jagga Bata Jahan Par Khuda Nahi...

Poetry world mae app ka suagat hai :p

Re: Vo Jagga Bata Jahan Par Khuda Nahi...


Ghalib kaa she'r to nahiiN hai kiuN k jaise likhaa gayaa hai vo to bahr se hii Khaarij hai: she'r kuchh yuN honaa chaahiye:
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zaahid sharaab peene de masjid meN baiTh kar
yaa vo jagah bataa jahaN par Khudaa nahiiN!**

some say it's DaaGh Dehlavii's she'r but i don't think so...it's NOT his style and the language he used.

tou are right these two ash'aar by Ghalib and Iqbal is farce. for the rest, i don't care who wrote.