vo ek naya Ghalib hai
tareef apni chahta hai
idhar udhar ki maarta hai -
tootay taaray dekh kar
apna aks dekha kar
nazmain likhta rehta hai
bara flasfa karta hai
jab usay kaho k jo likhtay ho
usmain koee dum nahin hai
to rooth kar baitht jaata hai
alvida karnay lagta hai
lakin thoray arsay baad
**bazm main phir bhaaga **
bhaaga aata hai
welcome welcome sun kar
moonchon main muskrata hai
kitna bara shair hai
chamcha giri chahta hai!
Re: vo apni moonchon main muskrata hai
what am i reading here Anwaar bahi :)
Re: vo apni moonchon main muskrata hai
what am i reading here Anwaar bahi :)
What you are hearing is called a "Personal Attack" in GS terminology; however, do not worry about it. This place is for us to share our works and to share the works of known poets... The problem is that, it will be very surprising if anything will be done about bigots any further. For your reading pleasure, I have been called "Janwaar" on this very site and nothing was done about it except removing the posts... and when I retaliated, I was given the warning; well ofcourse, the bigot itself was a good friend of the "owner" of the forum but perhaps he was given a warning but not for a personal attack (my sources say that)... beat that... this is nothing :-)
Re: vo apni moonchon main muskrata hai
Uncle jis k liyay ap nay itni mehnat ki hai yay haseen nazam likhnay ki :d un ki to moochain hi nahi hain 
Re: vo apni moonchon main muskrata hai
ye nick badel badel ke kio ate heyn:mad:
Re: vo apni moonchon main muskrata hai
yay sabit kernay k liyay masoom je k yay waqayee mental hospital say bhagay hoay hain :D
Re: vo apni moonchon main muskrata hai
Uncle!
Batheeja/Batheejee ( brother’s son/daughter)
Kush raho
Re: vo apni moonchon main muskrata hai
kya huaa..?
Re: vo apni moonchon main muskrata hai
kya huaa..?
The niece let out four loud guffaws. bhai ki baiti hanstay hanstay mar gayi.
Re: vo apni moonchon main muskrata hai
Omar , if you want to write some one 's Hiju , atleast write it in proper urdu . Something which makes sense and fun to read .
likna hai tu liko , lakin kaam as kaam waazan mein tu hoo . is say ache poetry to rikshaw or truck kay peachay likii hote hai !
Re: vo apni moonchon main muskrata hai
Omar , if you want to write some one 's Hiju , atleast write it in proper urdu . Something which makes sense and fun to read .
likna hai tu liko , lakin kaam as kaam waazan mein tu hoo . is say ache poetry to rikshaw or truck kay peachay likii hote hai !
This erudite comment by Aliyish is not much different than the one he made earlier on a poem by 'tweetybird' as follows:
"Bibi u better contact some Pakistani rikshaw or truck wala , they might gona use yr poetry ! warna or tu kissi kaam ki nahe hai "
Seems like he has extensive knowledge of Pakistani rickshaw-waalas and truck drivers. Congratulations.
Re: vo apni moonchon main muskrata hai
^^ Thanks for calling it a brainy comment , guess I do have a comprehensive knowledge of contemporary urdu poetry . Therefore I rightly classified your poetry .
It is just all about calling a spade a spade , this cake of yours doesn’t worth a candle mate , You know what I mean ?
Re: vo apni moonchon main muskrata hai
Ahhh…
yahan konn maghaz maree karay!!!:aq:
Re: vo apni moonchon main muskrata hai
Amal bhai aap kahan hain ?
SG mein yeh sab chal raha hai mujhe to pata he nahi tha ALLAH he reham karay ~