Violence in a House, On a Woman

RAW LIFE…
Crude, life…
Wild life, but it is not supposed to be so, is it?
Yet, it is simply what it is – raw life, crude and wild!

Within the person of a woman,
Within the treasure of shame, is the poverty of laying bare.
Unstoppable like the weeping and crying of a child…
Who just won’t shut-up.
Her soul, in front of her, for her to protect, comfort

Could she be heard, for all that she feels?
Can she be saying, all that she would like to do?
Reorder things to her liking
No, she is not perpetually sad or upset
It’s but her sophistication at the margins of his carelessness
Yes, she is just distressed.

Patiently looking on the world, in her household
Careless all else, that does not forgive her, ever
How continually does she take the pains, to keep it altogether?
But herself…shattering every now and every then
Like so, she never comes around to herself.
Brought on how, though?
Waiting why, though?
Calling on whom, though?
Then Trusting why, though?
A woman’s ‘hold-out’ of holding-in,
Not a safe respite of a hold-out
But, it is just that - raw, crude and wild.
Isn’t it?

Dushwari

Re: Violence in a House, On a Woman

Could she be heard, for all that she feels?
Can she be saying, all that she would like to do?
:k:Great Dushwari:)

Re: Violence in a House, On a Woman

Beautiful..

Re: Violence in a House, On a Woman

thanks, Goodnews and Ahmer.
the poem is inspired by a woman who suffers in her married (better described - marred life) life, due to an unethical and selfish husband.
any man loses everything, in the long run, when he does not realize that he has become abusive in a relationship to his spouse.

best,
Dushwari

Re: Violence in a House, On a Woman

women r there to put deodorants out for their husbands:(

mai nai kehtey:snooty:

Re: Violence in a House, On a Woman

lifeless,
sorry, it is not that complicated for men to use their own, or is it?
what does this mean ‘mai nai kehtey:snooty:’
best,
Dushwari