Veeran Jaa.zeera

**Mein jah kay kuch kaam karon **

**or Tum ja kay soo’jaoon **

**in heeron jasyi ankhon ko **

**kah’ay ko matti maati karo **

**kuch paal bar ko tum susta’lo **

**phir haath tumhara tahmay gay **

**or tum ko iz veernay say **

**hum duuur kahin Lay’jain gay **

**us jagah jahan bee khushiyan kay **

**Har soo Gulab khiltay hoon **

**us jagah , jahan pay Jah kar **

**kahin appnay naam be miltay hoon ! **

**Ay kanch ke Gurya , tora sa **

**kuch dair ko tum susta lay **

**Jab duur nagar kay bagahoon mein **

**ummed kee khaliyan khil’nay ko **

**baytaab see hokay baytain gee!! **

**hum haath tumhara taham.may gain **

**or Ghum kee veerna Ja.zeeray say **

**Tumhain duur kahain lay ja.ain gay!! **

**(Aliyish) **

Re: Veeran Jaa.zeera

Very nice buhat umda

although poor roman urdu creates difficulty in reading

Re: Veeran Jaa.zeera

very touchy aliyish :)

Re: Veeran Jaa.zeera

full of imagination and purity of thought. I liked this one. Only that the title could have been something better... the poem sounds quite romantic and the thought is delicate too... but the title is altogether opposite to all that feeling the poem builds..

Re: Veeran Jaa.zeera

Buss is ki kami reh gaii thi

Re: Veeran Jaa.zeera

the moral of this poem ...take some rest : D

very nice Aliyish .... good work

Re: Veeran Jaa.zeera

Lovely :)

door zaroor layjana ye na ho khana hi pakatay rahjaye :D