vaalid-e-moHtaram marHoom kii ek Ghazal

salaam dosto,
ummeed hai k mizaaj-e-giraamii ba_Khair hiNge.

aaj ek arsa_haa-e-daraaz ke ba’d maiN apne marHoon vaalid-e-moHtaram kii ek Ghazal pesh-e-Khidmat karne kii jasaarat kar rahaa huN…ummeed-e-qawii hai k aapkii taba’-e-naazuk par baar-e-garaaN na hogii…apnii aaraa se zaroor nawaaziyegaa, ai’n baa’is-e-sad navaazish o karam hogii.

faqat Khaak_nashiiN,
_______KKF

Qit’a:

ik she’r hai jo raunaq-e-maHfil ke liye hai
ik she’r teh-e-dil se hai jo dil ke liye hai
majnuuN kii nigaahoN meN ma’nii kii kamii kia
Lailaa kabhii zaahir, kabhii meHmil ke liye hai

Ghazal:

zindagii Khowaab hai yaa shoGhl hai Khud Khaam abhii
har jagah jaise rahaa jaataa ho kuchh kaam abhii

dekhiye kis ko mile chaak-e-jigar kii taufeeq
jalva-e-gul hai fareb-e-nazar-e-'aam abhii

daad-e-aashuftah_sarii de ke guzar jaa Khaamosh
saKht barham hai mizaaj-e-saHar o shaam abhii

mujh se kahtaa hai koii aur zaraa thak jaauuN
yeh hai manzil to Khud aatii hai teh-e-gaam abhii

duusre dard kaa saamaaN na yeh ho jaaye kahiiN
yeh Gham-e-zeest k hai durd-e-teh-e-jaam abhii

Haq koii terii balandii kaa hai baaqii shaayad
taa’ir-e-fikr ko jumbish hai teh-e-baam abhii

chashm-e-saaqii tujhe kia maHram-e-asraar kare
tuu hai laGhzish meN, chhalaktaa hai tiraa jaam abhii

shukran :slight_smile:

Re: vaalid-e-moHtaram marHoom kii ek Ghazal

Haq koii terii balandii kaa hai baaqii shaayad
taa’ir-e-fikr ko jumbish hai teh-e-baam abhii

:lajawab:

This reminds me a ghazal of Behzad Laucknawi:

Ae Jazba-E-Dil Gar Main Chahoon - YouTube](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hFCIy9YJUo8)

Re: vaalid-e-moHtaram marHoom kii ek Ghazal

paseeraaii kaa teh-e-dil se shukria.

aapkii pesh kardah Ghazal dil ko chhoo gaii…gaayekii bhii apne 'urooj par hai. :slight_smile:

Re: vaalid-e-moHtaram marHoom kii ek Ghazal

Waliakum asalam :lajawab:

Itni sakheel Urdu app ke first paragraph main:smilestar:

Re: vaalid-e-moHtaram marHoom kii ek Ghazal

ik she’r hai jo raunaq-e-maHfil ke liye hai
ik she’r teh-e-dil se hai jo dil ke liye

Zabardast :k:

Re: vaalid-e-moHtaram marHoom kii ek Ghazal

to, samajhne ke liye kab likhaa thaa…aapko to bas paRhnaa thaaa! :stuck_out_tongue: :smiley: :cb:

shukran…qit’a k is she’r kii taraH ek gaanaa bhii thaa…

Re: vaalid-e-moHtaram marHoom kii ek Ghazal

AApk walid e mohtaram nay koi kitaab bhi publish kervaey thee apnay kalaam per mabni?!?

Re: vaalid-e-moHtaram marHoom kii ek Ghazal


nahiiN...vo shaa'irii apnii taskeen ke liye kiyaa karte the aur chuN k vo Khalvat nasheen the is liye shohrat se aHtiraaz kiyaa karte the HaalaaN k unke ustaad AsGhar GonDvii aur saathii sho'araa Jigar Muradabadii, Firaq Gorakhpurii aur MajrooH Sultaanpurii dunyaa-e-she'r o suKhan meN apnaa Dankaa bajvaa chuke the. vo donoN aksar israar kiyaa karte the k aap bhii mushaa'iroN meN chalaa kareN magar vaalid saaHab ne aisaa apne liye munaasib nahiiN samjhaa...

...ab ham log koshish kar rahe haiN k unkaa deevaan chhape.

Re: vaalid-e-moHtaram marHoom kii ek Ghazal

:eek:

muradabadi :hayaa:

han naa kuch alfaaz pherney main bhi nahi arahey :bummer:

Re: vaalid-e-moHtaram marHoom kii ek Ghazal

chashm-e-gardeedah kiuN? :smiley:

kaun se alfaaz paRhne meN nahiiN aa sake? lemme know! :slight_smile: