uthh gaye dast-e-dua lubb per dua kuch bhee nahii

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

HeArT_HaCKeR February 24, 2005, 7:16pm 1

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Khamoshi mien shoor tha mae ne suna kuch bhee nahii
Us ne sub kuch diya liken kaha kuch bhee nahii

Tujh ko kia maloom ay jaan-e-jaha`N tere baghairr
Mera jeevan kutt gaya aur mae jiya kuch bhee nahii

Hukm ye hum ko mila us k siwa kuch maangiye
Uthh gaye dast-e-dua lubb per dua kuch bhee nahii

Terii khatir umeR bhar ka rut-jaga hum ko Qabool
Chahato`N mien aik shab ka jaagna kuch bhee nahii

Pyaar se dekha mujhe lubb bhee hilay us k Khaleel
Dil dharak utha mera lekin howa kuch bhee nahii

~ Khaleel Ahmed ~ ***

system February 24, 2005, 7:36pm 2

Re: uthh gaye dast-e-dua lubb per dua kuch bhee nahii

Lovely poem HH sis... :-)

Oh, not sure but I think you missed out a word in the second line… the place where I have put the questionmark

HeArT_HaCKeR February 24, 2005, 8:09pm 3

Re: uthh gaye dast-e-dua lubb per dua kuch bhee nahii

thanks for likin KN.
err i dunno. jahan se note ki thee wahan aisa hee likha howa tha :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh February 25, 2005, 11:52am 4

Re: uthh gaye dast-e-dua lubb per dua kuch bhee nahii

Buhat khoob HH, thanks for sharing:-)

system February 25, 2005, 2:36pm 5

Re: uthh gaye dast-e-dua lubb per dua kuch bhee nahii

Hmm.. well.. There really seems like something is missing in that line.. but it might be my weham.. so forget about that line As a whole it’s a nice poem

Saqi_the_angel February 25, 2005, 2:58pm 6

Re: uthh gaye dast-e-dua lubb per dua kuch bhee nahii

word missing is Keh

HeArT_HaCKeR February 25, 2005, 5:05pm 7

Re: uthh gaye dast-e-dua lubb per dua kuch bhee nahii

mujhe bhee aisa laga tha k koi word miss hai, shayad waQai mein koi ho.

Thanks Gul..

Shab-e-Hijar February 26, 2005, 12:41am 8

Re: uthh gaye dast-e-dua lubb per dua kuch bhee nahii

very nice :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR February 26, 2005, 9:27am 9

Re: uthh gaye dast-e-dua lubb per dua kuch bhee nahii

thanks :)

When you went to school...

Koyal February 27, 2005, 12:38am 10

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:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR February 27, 2005, 11:14am 11

Re: uthh gaye dast-e-dua lubb per dua kuch bhee nahii

:)

reet March 6, 2005, 11:21am 12

Re: uthh gaye dast-e-dua lubb per dua kuch bhee nahii

bahot khoob HH g.....

homer_j_simpson March 7, 2005, 2:06am 13

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:k:

Aryaan March 7, 2005, 3:09am 14

Re: uthh gaye dast-e-dua lubb per dua kuch bhee nahii

It’s Beautiful HeArT HaCKeR…:k:

Golden_Scorpion_1 March 7, 2005, 7:35am 15

Re: uthh gaye dast-e-dua lubb per dua kuch bhee nahii

Hukm ye hum ko mila us k siwa kuch maangiye
Uthh gaye dast-e-dua lubb per dua kuch bhee nahii

Wah… Very Beautiful… Tnx Dear