ussey yaad rakhhon ke ussey bhool jaoon

HI
jo jese zehan me ayaa mene wese hee likh dia he na to urdu meri zubaan he or na mujhe poori ati he koi galti ho to plz sorry

ussey yaad rakhoon ke ussey bhool jaon
kion na aaj main khud ko hee azmaoon
wo guzra huwa kal wo tujh se juri teri yaaden
jo bhool jae ye sab wo dil kahan se laoon
meri khtaa kia thi or mujhe zsaza kia dee
koi majboori hogi yehi keh kar dil ko behlaoon
ik main hoon aaj bhi ussi dorahey pe khara hoon
sochon me gumm idher jaoon ke udher jaoon
ye rastey hain mushkil or manzil bhi he door
tum agar saath ho me ik pal bhi na ghabraoon
main akela chaltey chaltey thak gea hoon jonaid
dil chahta he jab ankh kholoon har suu tujeh paoon

Re: ussey yaad rakhhon ke ussey bhool jaoon

both achi hai...apki poetry hai?

Re: ussey yaad rakhhon ke ussey bhool jaoon

Nice One Jonaid...

ji meri apni likhi hui he

Re: ussey yaad rakhhon ke ussey bhool jaoon

itz really gud!!!

apko acha laha apne pasand kia really thx

Re: ussey yaad rakhhon ke ussey bhool jaoon

u got talent jonaid:)

Re: ussey yaad rakhhon ke ussey bhool jaoon

v nice broo .. keep it up ... coolll

thx pasand karney ka bro

thx pasand karney ka doll ji

jab tum hee, tum na rahi to main bhi main , main na raha
na tumne zaroori samjha kuch sunna or na mene kuch kaha

jald hee issey poori kar aap sab doston ki nazar karoonga

Re: ussey yaad rakhhon ke ussey bhool jaoon

zabrdast koshish hai .....plz keep going

Re: ussey yaad rakhhon ke ussey bhool jaoon

thx saqi ji ap ka hukumm tha ussey poora to karna to thaa phir wohi baat jo jese zehann me ayaa aap sab doston ki nazar

jab tum hee, tum na rahi to main bhi main , main na raha
na tumne zaroori samjha kuch sunna or na mene kuch kaha
kia ehdeo paaymaan they kia wadey they kia iqraar they
or ab? ab to jese in jaisa hum dono main kuch bhi na raha
kabhi wakt miley to sochna apne dil ko bhi zara tatolna
kesi chahat thi jo wakt-e- judai ankh se ik aanso bhi na baha
mujhe ye gamm nahi ke mene tujhe paney se pehley kho dia
jonaid ranj ye ke me ujraa to khud tere paas bhi akhir kia raha