Ussey kehna...

mahamkhan · September 27, 2006, 8:45am

**Shab-e-tanhaii
Wo jo baray sukhh mein hai
Ussey kehna
Ke raat ka pichla pehr hai
Aur abhi hum jaagte hein
Hamarii ankhon se neend koson dour hai
Hamare lub abhi tuk uske naghme gungunatay hein
Hamara zehn ab bhee us ki baatien sochta hai
Kabhi hum huns dete hein
Kabhi jee bhar ke rootay hein
Shab-e-tanhaii ki yakh-basta hawaon
Usse kehna
Hum ab bhee ba-wazuu ho ker tumhara naam lete hein
Usse kehna
Ya apna Naqsh dhoo jaaye
Ya phir se apna ho jaaye
**

Ehsass · September 27, 2006, 9:15am

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very nice really,maham ji good choice again

Sannan · September 27, 2006, 9:36am

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Buhat Khubsurat Nazam Maham ...... kuch she'r yaad aa gai

Raat Ka Pichla Pahar Aisa Bhi Ho Ga
Urri Hay Neenad Meri Woh Bhi Jagta Sa Hoga
Main Uss Kay Hath Key Raikhaon Main Likhta Tha Kabhi
Aaj bichar gia hoon to woh hath mul raha ho ga ....

NikamiJano · September 27, 2006, 9:57am

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nice one maham :)

EEMAAN · September 27, 2006, 11:05am

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very nice..

sour_candy · September 27, 2006, 7:55pm

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thats really beautiful,mind blowing especially the second last verse...

hum ab bhi bawazoo ho kar us ka naam laitay hain......SUPERB.

mahamkhan · September 28, 2006, 7:35am

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Thanx... Ehsass gee
Thanx a lot Sannan gee....accha shair hai
Thanx Nikami jano
Thanx Eemaan
n Thanx a lot Sour candy

SinlneR · September 28, 2006, 7:49am

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Ya apna Naqsh dhoo jaaye
Ya phir se apna ho jaaye

hatts of to u maham jee...

sunny_nicky · September 28, 2006, 11:18am

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hmm nicee

IS · September 29, 2006, 5:19am

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Bohat he khoobsurat nazam hay let me add this beautiful piece of poetry into my journal :-)
thanks for sharing

mahamkhan · September 29, 2006, 8:53am

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Thanx a lot...
Sinlner,Sunny n IS for liking my post

Vengaboyz · September 29, 2006, 10:06am

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bhut achi hey

nakhan · September 30, 2006, 3:10am

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Wow bohat Zabardast....

mahamkhan · September 30, 2006, 6:52am

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Thank you** Vengaboyz & Nakhan gee**

Dushwari · September 30, 2006, 8:00am

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Mukarar.

the theme captures so well, how you describe the want for the beloved to be around.

keep it up, very nice.

happy_dani · September 30, 2006, 1:03pm

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very nice maham g.........thanx 4 sharing

mahamkhan · October 1, 2006, 2:21pm

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Thanx both of u 4 liking it.....!

Jhanjharewali · October 8, 2006, 9:28pm

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Kya kahiye mahamji! kuch tareefen khamosh reh kar ki jaati hai. So when i read it i was quiet for a time.

goodnews · October 8, 2006, 10:22pm

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jissay maiN choR daiyta hooN, ussay maiN bhool jaata hooN

phir uss shakhs ki taraf palluT ker maiN kabhi dekhaa naheeN kerta

Anwar Quraishi ka yeh intikhab is ka jwab ho sakta hy. Jab chor doya tu chor diya. Jis ny sunna nahi os ko kia sunnana "woh Muhawra hy na "Andhy ky agy roy apny bhi nyn khoy" So nyn bchao Bhol jao,Asan nahi bholna magar namumkin bhi nahi:D
{Gu ky Intikhab acha hy! magar aysi nazmin prh kr baz bachiyan or bachy is pr hi amal krny ki koshish krty hin On ky liy nasihat hy Haqqeeqat pasand raho Himat rakho,Thik hy koi ghalti man kr ay byizat k rky mat nikalo magar ju ap ki prwa na kry os ki prwa.....Bat banti nahi:)}

mahamkhan · October 9, 2006, 12:37pm

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Thank you Jhanjharewali