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[Shazia_Arif]

@Sannan

Shazia g aap key ghazal buhat achi hay aur buhat lutaf aaya parh kar leekan iss she’r kay dosray misray par ghour karain

Ikk roshni ki lao ko dekha tha uss paar
ikk hoshrubah sergoshi ko suna tha uss paar

Sergoshi buhat madham awaz ko kahtay hain aur hoshruba hosh urra dainay walli jo aam toor par kissi shakhas ya cheez ko samnay daikh kar kaha jata hay jaisay kah uss ka husan hosh ruba hay …. Baqi Cheekh jo hoti hay ussay hum Dilkharash kah saktay hain kah uss key dilkharash cheekhain sun kar mujhay neend nahin aai
Baqi agar aap khoubsurat awaz kay baray mein likhna chahti hain to Madhur ka lafz istam’al karain ziyada acha lagay ga …….
Shaiza g don’t mind about this post martem but just aik dafa aap **Madhur **ya koi aur lafz sergoshi kay sath laga kar daikhain to ziayda lutaf aai ga …….

Ikk roshni ki lao ko dekha tha uss paar
ikk Madhur sergoshi ko suna tha uss paar

Anyway you have nice talent and just keep it up …….

thank u so much 4 the correction,han laga to mujhe b kuch ajeeb tha bt din’t knw wht shud b the right word.thanx 4 the positive critisism.