Ikk roshni ki lao ko dekha tha uss paar
ikk hoshrubah sergoshi ko suna tha uss paar
kuch zakhmon ko mundmil dekha to phir se khurach dia
inn zakhmon se wabasta hai ikk yaad uss paar
kuch hasratain theen dil main jo dil na keh saka
woh hasratain thin shayad k sarab tha uss paar
haath ka takiah bana k palkon ki ott se dakha
koi muzmhil khara tha,sir jhukaye uss paar
yeh kya be-saro-samani ka aalam hai ja baja
nah iss paar sukoon hai na qarar uss paar
hadd se guzarna bhi hamain ata nhi ZIA
phir kya hadood thehreen iss paar ya uss paar???
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thnku so much aryaan.
Shazia g aap key ghazal buhat achi hay aur buhat lutaf aaya parh kar leekan iss she’r kay dosray misray par ghour karain
Ikk roshni ki lao ko dekha tha uss paar
ikk hoshrubah sergoshi ko suna tha uss paar
Sergoshi buhat madham awaz ko kahtay hain aur hoshruba hosh urra dainay walli jo aam toor par kissi shakhas ya cheez ko samnay daikh kar kaha jata hay jaisay kah uss ka husan hosh ruba hay …. Baqi Cheekh jo hoti hay ussay hum Dilkharash kah saktay hain kah uss key dilkharash cheekhain sun kar mujhay neend nahin aai
Baqi agar aap khoubsurat awaz kay baray mein likhna chahti hain to Madhur ka lafz istam’al karain ziyada acha lagay ga …….
Shaiza g don’t mind about this post martem but just aik dafa aap **Madhur **ya koi aur lafz sergoshi kay sath laga kar daikhain to ziayda lutaf aai ga …….
Ikk roshni ki lao ko dekha tha uss paar
ikk Madhur sergoshi ko suna tha uss paar
Anyway you have nice talent and just keep it up …….
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thanks for sharing
Re: USS PAAR...
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Shazia g aap key ghazal buhat achi hay aur buhat lutaf aaya parh kar leekan iss she’r kay dosray misray par ghour karain
Ikk roshni ki lao ko dekha tha uss paar ikk hoshrubah sergoshi ko suna tha uss paar
Sergoshi buhat madham awaz ko kahtay hain aur hoshruba hosh urra dainay walli jo aam toor par kissi shakhas ya cheez ko samnay daikh kar kaha jata hay jaisay kah uss ka husan hosh ruba hay …. Baqi Cheekh jo hoti hay ussay hum Dilkharash kah saktay hain kah uss key dilkharash cheekhain sun kar mujhay neend nahin aai Baqi agar aap khoubsurat awaz kay baray mein likhna chahti hain to Madhur ka lafz istam’al karain ziyada acha lagay ga ……. Shaiza g don’t mind about this post martem but just aik dafa aap **Madhur **ya koi aur lafz sergoshi kay sath laga kar daikhain to ziayda lutaf aai ga …….
Ikk roshni ki lao ko dekha tha uss paar ikk Madhur sergoshi ko suna tha uss paar
Anyway you have nice talent and just keep it up …….
thank u so much 4 the correction,han laga to mujhe b kuch ajeeb tha bt din't knw wht shud b the right word.thanx 4 the positive critisism.
thank u so much 4 the correction,han laga to mujhe b kuch ajeeb tha bt din't knw wht shud b the right word.thanx 4 the positive critisism.
Thanks for taking my suggestion positively but i can't criticize bcoz i'm not a perfect poet but just try to get some know how ...anyway keep it up
Thanks for taking my suggestion positively but i can't criticize bcoz i'm not a perfect poet but just try to get some know how ...anyway keep it up
its okay,thanx g.
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diwaane ne sir zhuka, tujhse baaten ki
wo kya jaanay dunia kya?, kya hai us paar?
Bahut Khoob Shazia ji, Maza aa gaya!
diwaane ne sir zhuka, tujhse baaten ki wo kya jaanay dunia kya?, kya hai us paar?
Bahut Khoob Shazia ji, Maza aa gaya!
waise ye sher to tha he nai nazam mai(kidin)thanx 4 likin Rajey.waise where hd u been?
waise ye sher to tha he nai nazam mai(kidin)thanx 4 likin Rajey.waise where hd u been?
Dar asal ye sher aapki nazam ko padhne ke baad ban gaya... to aapki nazam se nikla sher aapko hi surrender kar diya, kya ye OK OK tha..?
Dar asal ye sher aapki nazam ko padhne ke baad ban gaya... to aapki nazam se nikla sher aapko hi surrender kar diya, kya ye OK OK tha..?
han g sure,bilkul okay shokay tha bt requestin u k ap hindi words kum kum he use kia krain i dn't hve any awareness with this language.