Uss ko choo lay hawa to baad-e-saba kehlaati hai -my own try

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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salam

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its one of my nadaaniyaN.
How is it?

"**Woh jiss ki ankhoN main sitaray saaray chamaktay hoN
woh jiss kay gaaloN par gul gulshan mehektay hoN
woh jiss kay honthoN say meethay phool barastay hoN

jiss ki baatoN ki khushboo, raag sunaati ho
jiss ki sochoN main narmi, sakoon laati ho
woh jiss kay hathoN say mehnat sharma jaati ho

woh jo chalti ho to zameen gudgudaati hai
uss ko choo lay hawa to baad-e-saba kehlati hai
woh muskurati ho to dil say hi muskuraati hai

uss kay honthon par mera saans thehar jata hai
likh kar naam mera, saans wahiN marr jata hai
harr lafz wahan, bass goonga ho kar jata hai

haaN wuhi!

jiss kay seenay main samandar bhi doob jaayeN
jiss ki fikar main daulti hoN kehkashaayeN
paas uss kay raaz-e-dunia bhi daurr kar aayeN

WOH KIOON RAAT RAAT BHAR ROTI HAI ABBB ? ? **"

bass yaar, kuch aisa hi hai

[This message has been edited by dil e nadaan (edited June 01, 2002).]

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WOH KYO ROYEE ADDRESS DO POCH KAR BATAONGI

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NICE TRY KEEP IT UP BROTHER!

Dekh Ruswaee ka sauda hai ab na kabhi
Itnni shiddat say kisi shaks ki chaahat karna,

raahaygi shama-e-wafa yunhi ta abaad roshan
ghazal kay roop main jeenay ka hosaala rakhna!

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hehehehehe

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agar poochnay say maloom hota to main khud na pooch leta bhala!
ab agar mujhay itna maloom hai kay woh raton ko roti hai to khud hi soch lo kay kaha rehti hogi woh!

thanx

bass yaar, kuch aisa hi hai

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very nice dile nadan ge

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keep it up

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and plzz bata dijiye jo ratooN ko roti
woh kaha rahti hai am so

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kîBàÎå H@ï

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very Nice try Dil-e-nadaan tujhe hua kya hai:)keep it up

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arey chanda wuh pata hai kahan rehti hai humain bhi nahin pata

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maybe Dile-nadaan ke dil me

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Nice …

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Yaar agar mobile No. howay .. tay abhi pata kar letay hain ..

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hehheheh

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sabb maloom karna chahtay hai n kay kahan rehti hai ronay wali?

jiss kay honthoN ka main nay zikar kiya hai, woh to meray dil main aur mere hi ghar main rehti hai.

aur baaqi najanay kitni ronay wali kahan kahan rehti hain? kon jaanay?

bass yaar, kuch aisa hi hai