Usko dhunde to vo mile bhi kahan

Jhanjharewali · September 4, 2007, 7:57am

khud se hum ik nafas hile bhi kahan
usko dhunde to vo mile bhi kahan

khemaa khemaa guzar le ye shab
subah-dum ye qafila bhi kahan

ab ta’mul na kar dil-e-khud_kaam
ruuTh le phir ye silsilen bhi kahan

aao apas mei kuch gile kar len
varna yuun hae ke phir gile bhi kahan

khush ho seeno in kharashon par
phir tanaffus ke ye sile bhi kahaan

JAUN ELIYAH

SJ · September 4, 2007, 8:07am

Re: Usko dhunde to vo mile bhi kahan

nice sharing JW............:)

redidentity · September 4, 2007, 8:11am

Re: Usko dhunde to vo mile bhi kahan

Buhat Khoob :)

tum_bin_1 · September 4, 2007, 11:24am

Re: Usko dhunde to vo mile bhi kahan

Nice :)

Amal · September 4, 2007, 2:50pm

Re: Usko dhunde to vo mile bhi kahan

Another lovely piece … thanx for sharing

Prince_Ali · September 4, 2007, 3:50pm

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buhut khub :k:

Jhanjharewali · September 9, 2007, 2:38pm

Re: Usko dhunde to vo mile bhi kahan

thanks pyare doston for liking it. Amal, after a long while I too was touched by a poem. so beautiful na :)

Shab-e-Hijar · September 9, 2007, 5:01pm

Re: Usko dhunde to vo mile bhi kahan

Nice :k:

Koyal · September 10, 2007, 2:41am

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nice one

Jhanjharewali · September 10, 2007, 1:27pm

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thanks shabbojaan n miss koyal :)

being_lonely · September 10, 2007, 1:30pm

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ab ta’mul na kar dil-e-khud_kaam
ruuTh le phir ye silsilen bhi kahan

aao apas mei kuch gile kar len
varna yuun hae ke phir gile bhi kahan

jhon eliya bohat he pyara shayar tha zindagi se TanG ~

nice sharing Jw

Jhanjharewali · September 10, 2007, 1:34pm

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U knw Sid, the more I read this, the more I fall in love with it. Its superb. Very concise.

being_lonely · September 10, 2007, 1:36pm

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jHOn ~~~

dhund chaye hoi hai jheeloon par
urr rahay hain parinday teeloon par

sab ka rukh hai nashaimanoon ke taraf
basityoon ke taraf, banoon kee taraf

apnay gul'loon ko lay kar charwahay
sarhadi bastiyoon mein jaa pohanchay

dil e nakaam ! mein kahaan jaoon ?
ajnabi shaam ! mein kahaan jaoon ?

Jhanjharewali · September 10, 2007, 1:38pm

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oh thanks sid....nice addition

being_lonely · September 10, 2007, 1:42pm

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u should be :p

AQ · September 10, 2007, 5:12pm

Re: Usko dhunde to vo mile bhi kahan

John Eliyah, brother of Raees Amrohi, has always inpired me by his philosophical touch in his poetry. His poetry has so many moods simultanously.

My favourite from this poem would be:

khemaa khemaa guzar le ye shab
subah-dum ye qafila bhi kahan

aao apas mei kuch gile kar len
varna yuun hae ke phir gile bhi kahan