uskey haath kitney thandey they(again my fav)

tahreem_saeed · July 21, 2007, 5:20pm

Jub main ne us ke haath ko pehli dafa Choova …
to woh muskura ker boli …
tumharay haath kitne garam hain
us ne muj ko bataya
ke garam haath waffa aur khaloos ki nishanni hua kerte hain
yeh sun ker main itna khush hua
ke baqi sari baatain bhool gaya
waqt guzarta gaya aur main har baat bhoolta gaya
Aur aaj …
Jub main apne veeraan Kamray main
Tanha baitha hoon
Aur aaj …
Jub is tanhai main mere saath koi bhi nahi
To ACHANAK …
mujhe yaad aa raha hai
ke us ke haath kitnay THANDAY thay

redidentity · July 21, 2007, 5:40pm

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So Touching..

m.a.d.i.h.a · July 21, 2007, 5:59pm

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GREAT SHARING!!!

NikamiJano · July 21, 2007, 9:19pm

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nice nazam :)

rkopra · July 21, 2007, 10:09pm

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*When I touched her hands for
the first time,
she told me that my warm
hands tell that I am
faithful and full of love.

I was so happy to
hear that that I
forgot what I
was going to say.

And slowly with time I
forgot almost every other thing.
But today, all alone,
sitting in my room,
I suddenly remember -
how cold were her hands.*

fghd · July 21, 2007, 10:11pm

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usnay gloves nahee pehnay houn gein

rkopra · July 21, 2007, 10:21pm

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mazzak mat uraaeeyay is nazam ka. I like the metaphor here. Thank you Tahreem Saeed for sharing this poem with us.

Sheal · July 22, 2007, 12:38am

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very nice .

deep_ocean · July 22, 2007, 4:36am

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very nice :k:

goodnews · July 22, 2007, 4:39am

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Nahi woh dari hoi ho gi

tahreem_saeed · July 22, 2007, 7:09am

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aap ney to tareef nahi ke balkey point nikal leya:naraz:

tahreem_saeed · July 22, 2007, 7:10am

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thanks Deap ocean

tahreem_saeed · July 22, 2007, 7:12am

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thanks Ravi jee thanks alot i m happy k kisi ko pasand ayee kyunk meri fav nazm hai ye

tahreem_saeed · July 22, 2007, 7:12am

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thanks Ahmer

tahreem_saeed · July 22, 2007, 7:13am

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thanks Nikami jee

tahreem_saeed · July 22, 2007, 7:13am

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thanks madiha

Saqi_the_angel · July 23, 2007, 5:07pm

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Tehreem,

Beautiful, thanks for sharing