usi ne waaR kaR dala Jisey gham-khwaaR dekha tha

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

NikamiJano November 3, 2007, 12:49am 1

niGaah e ShOq se hUm ne tUmhien eik baaR dekha tha
kOii Jazba tha pehli baaR Jisey be-daaR dekha tha

baRa sasta zamana hAi yhahaN ab lOg biktey hAin
teRa soda bhi hUm ne kal saR-e-baZaaR dekha tha

wO jis k hOnt paR haR dUm sajii mUskaaN rehti thi
na Jaaney kyON usey maiN ne baRa beZaaR dekha tha

roz o shab badalney maiN bhala kya dair lAgti hAi
jO takht o taaj rakhtey they unhieN la-Chaar dekha tha

hUm apney dOst duShman ki khabaR jO rakh nahi paa’ye
usi ne waaR kaR dala Jisey gham-khwaaR dekha tha

tUm apni be-wafaii paR aGar naadim nahi hO tO
aankhOn ko tUmhaaRi PhiR kyOn zaiy-re-baar dekha tha

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Shab-e-Hijar November 3, 2007, 2:46am 2

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bohat khoob :k:

Aaj Kiss Baat Par Gussa Aaya ??????

AQ November 3, 2007, 3:01am 3

Re: usi ne waaR kaR dala Jisey gham-khwaaR dekha tha

was not this thread opened a month back by soniaa_jee with similar roman words :~)

http://www.paklinks.com/gs/showthread.php?t=265750

anyway, thanks for sharing… good reminder for everyone …

NikamiJano November 3, 2007, 7:31pm 4

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^ shaied lakin kaew dafa zahan se niqal jata like aik nzam peechay dino ki aur usi nazma ko 4 auR logo ne kaR dala..bz life may b umeR ka taqaza taad nahi rahta :(

NikamiJano November 3, 2007, 7:32pm 5

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thanks shabo

GuL-e-Tasbeeh November 3, 2007, 7:49pm 6

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Buhat khoob :-)

bholibisri November 4, 2007, 3:30pm 7

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Aryaan November 4, 2007, 3:38pm 8

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Bohat khoob NikamiJano..

bheegiyaad November 4, 2007, 3:44pm 9

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:k:

Bholay_Bisray November 4, 2007, 5:05pm 10

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Khobsourat Choice MOD Ji, saray shair hi pussand aaye.
PS:- It is so beautiful Poem that It is worth posting again

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NikamiJano November 5, 2007, 2:04am 11

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thanks :) Gul:)

NikamiJano November 5, 2007, 2:04am 12

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shukria BB sahi kahtey haiN ap :)

Paintings In My Mind...

NikamiJano November 5, 2007, 2:05am 13

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NikamiJano November 5, 2007, 2:06am 14

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shukria Ayaan

NikamiJano November 5, 2007, 2:06am 15

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:halo: