usey itna bata dena .....!!!!

aeno · June 16, 2009, 8:50am

usey itna bata dena
me us se door ho ker b,
bohat majboor ho ker b,
dukhon se choor ho ker b,
usi koyaad kerta hon

usey itna bata dena,
me dukh apne chupa ker b,
khushi k geet ga ker b,
hansi hooton pe saja ker b,
usi ko yaad kerta hon

usey itna bata dena,
jahan k ghamoon me kho ker b,
me dil k dagh dho ker b,
kisi kpas ho ker b,
sirf usi ko yaad kerta hon

usey itna bata dena … !!!

muncho · June 16, 2009, 9:44am

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acha hey!!
itee shidut ho tu uglay ko khud bhee pata chul jana chahiyaa?

Aryaan · June 16, 2009, 10:27am

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Nice One Aeno...

saqijani · June 16, 2009, 6:40pm

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beautiful.....its one of the best poems aeno...seedha ja ke dil ko hit kia hai

terray_naam · June 16, 2009, 6:42pm

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lovely jee

Dua_G · June 16, 2009, 9:52pm

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full of magic words... usay itna bhi bata dena k isi ko ishq kehty hein.

Dua_G · June 16, 2009, 9:53pm

Nai muncho ji kisi ko kuch bhi khud say pata nai chalta... har bat ka izhar bohat bohat zaroori hai. chahy wo dard-dil ho ya k muhabbat.

arsalan.khalid · June 19, 2009, 9:38pm

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beautiful!

Ahmi · June 20, 2009, 4:21am

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Beautiful sharing aeno...

being_lonely · June 20, 2009, 7:30am

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Okiz i vl tell .... ps nice nazm aeno ! btw kahan gayab thi bhae ?

aeno · June 20, 2009, 5:14pm

pata to sab chal jata hai, lkn jaan k an jaan banne ki adat b hoti hai na kuch logon me

aeno · June 20, 2009, 5:19pm

thnks BL, kuch bz thi lkn ab ati jati rahon gi :D

aeno · June 20, 2009, 5:21pm

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thnks 2 all :)