Hi people!
Help me decide which of the below sentences is correct in structure and better to read;
This collection consists of Prints, due to their versatility, complemented with a color palette ranging from neutrals to bright colors.
Or
This collection consists of Prints due to their versatility, complemented with a color palette ranging from neutrals to bright colors.
Or
This collection consists of Prints due to their versatility complemented with a color palette ranging from neutrals to bright colors.
SID_NY
June 27, 2015, 7:09am
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Its always very hard to come out of Coma
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I found first one most appropriate. Also, don’t you think it should be ‘this collection’ rather than ‘this collections’?
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This collection consists of prints due to their versatility, complemented with a color palette ranging from neutrals to bright colors.
^This is probably as close to correct as it gets. you had capitalized P from prints and collection already refers to multiple things so there was no need for “s” after.
I do believe however, @Southie is who you want to refer to in regards to grammar.
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Yes it was a typo, thnx for pointing it out.
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This collection consists of prints due to their versatility, complemented with a color palette ranging from neutrals to bright colors.
^This is probably as close to correct as it gets. you had capitalized P from prints and collection already refers to multiple things so there was no need for “s” after.
I do believe however, @Southie is who you want to refer to in regards to grammar.
I think so too!
Ok wl wait for southie to further advise on this.
Thanks
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this don’t make sense to me ‘due to their versatility’
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Trying to imply that prints/florals/etc have been incoprotaed due to their versatility. What is hard to understand in this?
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Maybe it should be “its” ?!
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@Guppshupper is right..I get what you are trying to say, but it’s not making sense. This would be better:
“This collection of versatile prints compliment each other with a broad color pallette, ranging from neutrals to brights.”
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Like Guppshupper I was struggling with all three versions. The good lady above has nailed it.
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Ok lets say i do not have the option to make any change except go with the top 3 versions.
Which wud be the best version to go with?
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Zareen, the 3 options you posted are not grammatically correct. “Due to the versatility” implies a direct action is about to follow, “complimented with…” is a fragment that does not lend any clarification to what precedes the comma.
Comma placement is irrelevant when the whole sentence structure is incorrect to begin with. Your predicate has no clause.
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Ok i pmed u let me know when u read it! Its a bit weird its nt showing in my sent msgs!
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Would this make any sense?
This range predominately consists of Florals due to their versatility and is complemented with a color palette ranging from neutrals to bright colors.
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just replied to your message
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@htmwrites - it is clear who the grammar pundit is in these the forums, and who the typo correcting wannabe is.
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Both of you are real good at it. Kudos!
