usay roktay bhi tu kis liyay?

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

chand_chehra October 27, 2004, 1:48am 1

woh jo shahr-e Dill tha ujr gaya woh jo Khawab tha bikhar gaya kabhi mo'osmon ki nazr lagi kabhi wahmon ney dara diya kabhi manzlon ke sarab ney hamay rastay main dagha diya kabhi Zindagi ki kitab se hamay jis ney chaha mita diya bas isi liyay woh jo ja raha tha tu door tak usay dekhtay hi rahay magar nahin di sada..... usay roktay bhi tu kis liyay? !!!

High-Tech October 27, 2004, 2:05am 2

nice
woh woh woh aik shair hai
dil jalay movie mei kehta
sahi yad nai
but something
aj kehti ho dil jalay say pyar hai tumhian
kal mera naam tak bhol jao gi tum
acha ramzan mei itni sad poems
khair hai ?
udas hain
shoulder chaheay doon ?
acha dupata rakh kar mera kandha use kar lain :)

High-Tech October 27, 2004, 2:08am 3

*** says:
mujhy shoulder nahi chaiye

okay to kya mangta ?
juli juli johny ka dil tujh pya aya juli
tera liay charh jao suli
tu he to meri jan hai jaan hai jaan hai
yeh gana hai yar ap kush na hona

chand_chehra October 27, 2004, 2:09am 4

High-Tech October 27, 2004, 2:11am 5

show_sha October 27, 2004, 2:54am 6

very nive C_C…:k:

Nazi83 October 27, 2004, 4:29am 7

cuteepie October 27, 2004, 5:57am 8

:k:

HeArT_HaCKeR October 27, 2004, 10:35am 9

Nice..:k:

Koyal October 30, 2004, 5:06pm 10

Re: usay roktay bhi tu kis liyay?

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

woh jo shahr-e Dill tha ujr gaya
woh jo Khawab tha bikhar gaya
kabhi mo'osmon ki nazr lagi
kabhi wahmon ney dara diya
kabhi manzlon ke sarab ney
hamay rastay main dagha diya
kabhi Zindagi ki kitab se
hamay jis ney chaha mita diya
bas
isi liyay
woh jo ja raha tha tu door tak
usay dekhtay hi rahay magar
nahin di sada.....
usay roktay bhi tu kis liyay? !!!
[/QUOTE]

usay roktey b tu kis leay v nice one of ma fav thanks for sahrin chand g:)

system October 30, 2004, 5:21pm 11

very nice :k:

m_kamal October 30, 2004, 6:15pm 12

rokney ki koshish to ki ja sakty thi.... pata to chal jata

anyway very nice

chand_chehra October 30, 2004, 7:35pm 13

muah!

chand_chehra October 30, 2004, 7:37pm 14

ab kya hosakta …

thanks all

m_kamal October 30, 2004, 7:40pm 15

likan chand_chehra g

mayosi kufar hay..........

Gemini_the_Great October 31, 2004, 1:21am 16

am I the only one who can smell love in this thread ;)

my lovely chanda,,, lovely choice like always, after all am your choice too :D

Koyal October 31, 2004, 2:55am 17

:halo:

abc1234 November 2, 2004, 7:03pm 18

:(

chand chehra...rok leti..shayad usay aap kee awaz ka intezar tha?

chand_chehra November 3, 2004, 12:43am 19

PS
no doubt u got a big nose

chand_chehra November 3, 2004, 12:46am 20

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by irem: *
:(

chand chehra...rok leti..shayad usay aap kee awaz ka intezar tha?
[/QUOTE]

kasay rokti woh mery liye golgapy leny jarha tha :D