~ us se kehna k wo khud hii samajh le sub kuch..

HeArT_HaCKeR · April 28, 2006, 10:08am

dil ne yunhii chaha k kion na aaj tere naam koii aisii ghazal mae likho`N jo boht hii pyarii ho tu soch k ye darbaar mien rakhii iltijaa mae ne aye mere hunaR aaj koii aisii ghazal atta ho mujhe jis k wujood se ubhartii hoon khushboyieN aisii jin se ehsaas ka koii juzz kabhii mila hii na ho abhii duao`N kii gonj fiza mien baQii thee tu mujhe laga jaise fiza mien muskura raha haii koii us muskurahat ne phir yuN mujhe mukhatib kiya tere hunar ka wo jaadoo abhii mila hii nahii jis kii taQraar se insan pighalne lagte hien tere ilm mien wo zindagii kahan ayee haii abhii jis kii jambish se jazbaat pighalne lagte hien tu jis k waastay chahtaa haii ik achootii ghazal us se kehna nahii tere pas aisa koii hunar jo saja bana k le aye kaheen se aisii ghazal jo tere wujood kii ra`naiyo`N kii baat kere jo tere khuloos kii oonchaiyo`N ko cho bhii sakayy jo tere jazbaat kii sachaiyo`N kii baat kere **us se kehna k ehtaraam ka ye pyaara rishta tere waaste tu jaise k zindagii haii koii us se kehna k wo khud hii samajh le sub kuchh har baat ko ghazal mien kehna zaroorii haii koii **

Precious_Khan · April 28, 2006, 10:13am

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Buhat khoob :-)

Maheen2002 · April 28, 2006, 11:13am

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beautiful...

system · April 28, 2006, 1:29pm

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Lovely naz'm HH.. thank you for sharing... :-)

By the way, kiski likhi hui hai?

SunnyBoy · April 28, 2006, 6:34pm

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buhat khoob

Prince_Ali · April 28, 2006, 9:17pm

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:k:

NikamiJano · April 28, 2006, 11:19pm

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nice one heartu..wesay ap hoti kahan hain aj kal :)

Shab-e-Hijar · April 29, 2006, 6:15am

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jano ye woh poem nahi jo Amal nay ap ki bday par likhi thi ??

thanks for sharing heart

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · May 2, 2006, 9:53am

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^ yes you are right ,its written by Amal
A wonderful piece , thanks for sharing HH:-)

farooqahmad · May 2, 2006, 10:09am

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Very very nice and captaviting. Thanks for sharing.

nakhan · May 2, 2006, 1:46pm

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Bohot Zabardast maza aa gaya...

us se kehna k ehtaraam ka ye pyaara rishta
tere waaste tu jaise k zindagii haii koii
us se kehna k wo khud hii samajh le sub kuchh
har baat ko ghazal mien kehna zaroorii haii koii***