us ne saath chora tu shaam dhall gayii jaisay ... ~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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* us ko kho ke Qismat bhii haath mal gayii jaisay hijR kii jo talkhii thii khoon mien ghul gayii jaisay

zindagii k mailay mein tujh se milna chaha tu
khwaab toot jata hai ankh khul gayii jaisay

khwahishoN k shouloN ne khud mein jalna chaha tu
moom ghul gaya jaisay, zaat jal gayii jaisay

in laraztii palkoN se yuN gira koii aansoo ujlay ujlay pholoN kii shaakh hil gayii jaisay

us ne aisay dekha tha waQt tham gaya jaisay
us ne saath chora tu shaam dhal gayii jaisay

mae tu chup yuN rehtii hoon lajawab ker dun gii
aur wo muskurata haii baat tall gayii jaisay

aaj tu seheR ker de mere dil ki bastii mien
aaj yun na janay du raat kal gayii jaisay

aaj tujh ko dekha tu yuN laga mae zinda hoon
ik saNs jo kho dii thee aaj mil gayii jaisay

tu ne kaisay ker dali raigaaN merii chahat
merii pehlii khwahish thii, dil mein rul gayii jaisay***

~Kanwal shahab Ahmed~**

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Re: us ne saath chora tu shaam dhall gayii jaisay ... ~

very nice, love it :)

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Re: us ne saath chora tu shaam dhall gayii jaisay ... ~

very very niceeee

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Re: us ne saath chora tu shaam dhall gayii jaisay ... ~

v nice heart:)

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Re: us ne saath chora tu shaam dhall gayii jaisay ... ~

V nice...HH

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Re: us ne saath chora tu shaam dhall gayii jaisay … ~

thanks to all. :flower1:

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Re: us ne saath chora tu shaam dhall gayii jaisay ... ~

really very nice bro

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Re: us ne saath chora tu shaam dhall gayii jaisay … ~

:halo: :CareBear: :rolleyes:

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Re: us ne saath chora tu shaam dhall gayii jaisay … ~

mere avatar se bhii pata nai laga .. tsk tsk :teary2:

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Re: us ne saath chora tu shaam dhall gayii jaisay ... ~

nice

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Re: us ne saath chora tu shaam dhall gayii jaisay ... ~

*Very Nice Hertu :-) *