Us ne mujhe youn chor diya

Us ne mujhe youn chor diya:)
MOHABBAT mein na jaanay us ne mera dil kyun thor diya
Meri aankhon ka paani nichor diya
Ub isi liye mein us se shaadi per bhi na zor diya
bus usay khayaalon mein he ub mei ne pyaar kiya

Re: Us ne mujhe youn chor diya

In appreciation of your poetry, I am translating the following. Keep writing. Those who criticise you now one day will envy you.

He left me and went his way

Why did he love me
to break my heart?
He squeezed out my
last tears drops.
That's why I
didn't pressure him
to marry me.
That's why I
now only love him
in my thoughts.

Re: Us ne mujhe youn chor diya

hi tweety..................
u r good in writing ......but u need to improve alot.............
keep trying............
practise makes man perfect!!:)

Re: Us ne mujhe youn chor diya

need to improve what

Re: Us ne mujhe youn chor diya

aur maine aap ka ye sher parte parte apna cigarette moon say chor dia