Us ki nigaahoN meiN ghazab ki maseehaai thi

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Amal September 2, 2006, 10:43pm 1

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Zindagi phir sey goya ragoN meiN utar aai thi
us ki nigaahoN meiN ghazab ki maseehaai thi

meri baatoN meiN haal dil ka chupa beittha tha
uske lehjey meiN merey lafzoN ki pazeeraai thi

naya hi rang tha jo aaNkhoN meiN umad aaya tha
ajab si mehak thi jo saaNsoN tak chali aai thi

wo eid ka chaand tha, sitaara tha ke jugnu tha
ya dhanak ki chaadar kisi ney raat gaey phelai thi

khusbuweiN kis tarhaN aaNgan meiN raqs na karteiN
seyj mohabbat ki phooloN ney khud sajaai thi

sawaal to ye tha ke deikhooN usey ke baat karooN
aalam-e-madhoshi meiN samaa’at thi aur beenaai thi

By: Amal
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fara September 2, 2006, 10:47pm 2

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**Wah!

Lajawab andaz aur munfarid bayan Amal. Dil khush ker diya!!

****** Zindagi phir sey goya ragoN meiN utar aai thi
us ki nigaahoN meiN ghazab ki maseehaai thi

Simply Beautiful.

goodnews September 2, 2006, 10:48pm 3

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Amal Khub so romantic some thing reminds me "Sabz Madham Roshni" by Parveen Shakir;)
naya hi rang tha jo aaNkhoN meiN umad aaya tha
ajab si mehak thi jo saaNsoN tak chali aai thi
Wah!

ghazal_kisi_ke September 3, 2006, 1:51am 4

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beautiful.

how to annoy gizzy?

HeArT_HaCKeR September 3, 2006, 12:09pm 5

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beautiful… thanks for sharing

Sannan September 4, 2006, 3:33am 6

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very nice ........ bari dilfaraib ghazal amal g ..thanks for sharing with us ...

Dushwari September 4, 2006, 3:42am 7

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awesome choice of words.
wonderful description of emotions.

NikamiJano September 4, 2006, 3:57am 8

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V nice Aymal :)...zRa romantic hai thora :)

goodnews September 4, 2006, 4:13am 9

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Sahih kha NJ ap ny OR Baqool Amal Sahib,
"Wohi to, romantic to hey, lekin shaed kuch ziaada hi ;)"

naya hi rang tha jo aaNkhoN meiN umad aaya tha
ajab si mehak thi jo saaNsoN tak chali aai thi

wo eid ka chaand tha, sitaara tha ke jugnu tha **
**ya dhanak ki chaadar kisi ney raat gaey phelai thi

khusbuweiN kis tarhaN aaNgan meiN raqs na karteiN
seyj mohabbat ki phooloN ney khud sajaai thi

_Masoom_Muskaan September 4, 2006, 7:33am 10

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amal bhae v nice:)

Prince_Ali September 4, 2006, 9:21am 11

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buhut khub :k:

Amal September 4, 2006, 10:38am 12

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fara, goodnews, ghazal kisi ke, HeArT HaCKeR, Sannan, Dushwari and Prince Ali, ghazal pasand karne ke leeye aap sab dostoN ka be’had shukriya

NikamiJi, jab pehli baar ye ghazal post hui thi to us waqt kya kaha tha aap ney? :~) By the way, hum romantic nahi ho saktey kya?

goodnews, Itni bhi romantic nahi…I know where you are quoting me from :~)

Masoom Muskaan, I am not talking to you

Bholay_Bisray September 4, 2006, 1:00pm 13

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Beuatiful As Usual! :)

wasay mughay yeh itni romantic nahi lugi , koi aur word use kiya jana chahiye iss kay liye ... ub word hay nahi , will think uger koi mil giya tu. but totally disagree jo romantic kah rahay hain and some saying "very" romantic....

tayray isq ki intha chahta hoon
daykh mayri sadgi main kiya chahta hoon

something like this :) , kion Amal?

_Masoom_Muskaan September 4, 2006, 1:13pm 14

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bhae voh kion ??

goodnews September 4, 2006, 2:34pm 15

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**OK:grumpy: **

Tery Ishq ki inteha chahta hon
Meri sadgi dykh kia chahta hon

goodnews September 4, 2006, 2:38pm 16

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Ap ki baqi ghazals k lehaz sy dykhi jay tu itni tu hy hi

Bholay_Bisray September 4, 2006, 3:39pm 17

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I also said “something like this” ** didnt i?** i was sure kay shair theek say nahi likh raha but just wanted to give a hint!

NikamiJano September 4, 2006, 6:35pm 18

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Aymal ab pahlay ki kia sari bataiN ap ko yaad haiN kia :^…wesay b dekhaiey kitni romantic hai k log laal peelay ho rahya ap ki gazal maiN

NikamiJano September 4, 2006, 6:35pm 19

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ap ko kia Romance k spelling atey haiN:snooty:

I_am_in_Love September 4, 2006, 9:12pm 20

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itna romance ke logon ke jazbat bharak uthe:hehe: