Us ke Baam se..

mirage · January 24, 2008, 6:50pm

***Ehd e wafa mai jee dekha, mar dekha hai
Us ke baam se aj utar kar dekha hai

chehron se kuch dhund bhi chat-ti jati hai
Dil ne bhi mayaar badal kar dekha hai

Rango ke shadaab jazeeron ke peechay
Bhookay insaano ka samandar dekha hai

Sukh ke chatnaaro par zardi phail gayi
dhoop ne mere ghar mai utar kar dekha hai

Teri yado ke gehre sanaate mai
Tanhayi ka zehr mila kar dekha hai***

Azad · January 25, 2008, 2:45am

Re: Us ke Baam se..

kafi mukhtalef andaz hay

babar444 · February 15, 2008, 4:58pm

Re: Us ke Baam se..

achi hay

chacha_Ghalib · February 15, 2008, 5:05pm

Re: Us ke Baam se..

bohat khoob... khaas kar ye shair

*** chehron se kuch dhund bhi chat-ti jati hai
Dil ne bhi mayaar badal kar dekha hai

***aap kaafi ba-maharat shaira lagti hain... share more of your work

bheegiyaad · February 15, 2008, 5:14pm

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very nice…:k:

mirage · February 17, 2008, 7:28pm

Re: Us ke Baam se..

:CareBear: @ shaira. Dosto ki meherbani hai aor kuch jasarat hojati hai, werna kahan ham kahan ye majal. Thanks anyway.