-- Unwaan aap dijiyay ...

salamz, after a long long time, I am trying to write something here, hope u will like it, thanks in advance :slight_smile:

**ab to itna bhi asaan nahi; **
kuch iss tarah yoon bay unwaan likhna
**garchay mazmoon bhi nahi; **
**par hay phir bhi hamain bohat kuch likhna **
jiss waqt diloN ki uss raah ko ik toofan baha lay gaya tha
tab hi to har lafz ka ik wo naam bhi chura lay gaya tha
koray kagaz ki tarah yeh nazam bhi bari bay asar hay aaj

samjh laitay thay bin kahay har ik wo alfaaz ko jab
kartay thay jo asar bin kahay dil kay jazbaat ko tab
ab to sab parh kar bhi; kuch bohat kuch baytabi si hay

uss raah kay musafir ko uss rah par laana hoga
magar uss say pehlay uss rah ko banana hoga
muddatain lagti hain jiss raah ko san’warnay main
ik pal bhi to nahi lagta uss raah ko uja’arnay main

ik aass si hay bhatkay musafir ko paanay ki; magar
**khoii raah yoonhi nahi milti bhataktay musafir ko **
bohat kuch khona hay, bohat khatan hay wo raah
zakhmoN say choor hay iss raah par aanay ki saza
**magar pakeeza hay iss maznil ko paanay ki jazaa **
yaad rakhta hay zamana unn musafiroN ko
fana to hojatay hain, par ik maqaam bana jaatay hain

by: Ata… (fil badi hay, so must be so many mistakes, sowwy)

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:k:

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mind blowing , amazing , lovely. aisi pyari poetry share karte raha kijiye.

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Lagta hay kisi ko pasand hi nai ayi :-(

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Kisi ki pasand ki prwa kion krty hain ap ny keh di yehi kafi hy;)
Achi Kawishb hy bas logon ko churai hoi shairi ki tareef krny ki ziada adat pr chuki hy:D So ziada repluy nahi hoy.Folbadih hy tu buhat khub hy:k:


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nahe yaar nicee 11

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Buhat umada Atta .... Ahci poetry .... Lagta Hay aap kay khiyalat khatam honay ka naam he naheen lay rahay thay .......... anyway keep it up

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Wow Ata aap bhi likhtey heiN mujhay aaj hi maloom huwa:~) buhat achi poem hay , thanks for sharing:-)

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nice poetry!

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bohet khoub dupettay k palou say ansu saaf kering............app to chupay rustem niklay!!

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IMIL, eye ki candy
shukria for comments!

**goodnew, **
**sunny, **
**sannan, **
**Pakeeza(gul-e-tasbeeh), **
**Maham Khan, **
Big bee,

aap sab ka bohat bohat shukria for liking and reading, feel better after your support and appreciation, I will be leaving, and I will reply after eid to u all inshAllah :slight_smile:
:flower2:

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:)…pakistan ko mera buuuuuuuuuuuuhat dhair sara salam pweeez:(

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:k: keep it up

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Ap kia ATA ko anghutha chap samajhti thin:confused:

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chaliey "UnwaaN" hum daitey haiN

koi manzil nahi milti musafiR ko bhatkanY k baad :)

nice sharing me bit late but u know bz bz bee :)

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Pakistan nay aap ko salam bhaija hay, and Pakistan nay poocha hay kay wo kab tak aap ki rah takta rahay ? :frowning:

hehe, ji kabhi kabhi bass, saal main aik aadh dafa… lekin I am not professional, bass aisay hi jo ji main aaya likh dia… lekin aap logon ki mohabbat hay jo parh laitay hain :smiley:
ps: kasi hain ?

than you sir :slight_smile:

hmm… acha title hay… lekin kafi lamba nai ?

how about **Bhatakti Manzilain **?

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hummm Bela-UnwaaN yeh ATA kaisi