unnoticed

warning: this is really rough… just came up with it…

My trembling screams
will go unnoticed
just the way
its always been
i’ll be standing
right here waiting for you
and you’ll walk past
without acknowledging me
It’s crazy I know it is
its infatuation..
thats all it is..
but its still a feeling
which will one day
eventually kill me
I’m not blaming you
for this ignorance
it’s me who is at fault
it’s me who should admit
that I lack the strength
to move on and live
the thought that hurts
the feeling that disturbs
is I’ll die one day
loving you…
and you’ll keep on living
never knowing me…

Re: unnoticed

:love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

now how’d i know u’d be the first to post? :hoonh:

ha ha ha ..couldn’t help it..:smiley:

ha ha ha ..couldn’t help it..:D..yup the stalker is back with a BANG ! :smiley:

hehe... i didnt go unnoticed... kinda contradictory huh? hehe

Re: unnoticed

:wave:
the poem is good, really nice , but depicts a state of fear…

fear of loss of love…which is very natural… :k:

thanx shappy..

i was trying to potray a sense of feeling u get for someone who u love painfully, but they dont even know..

and naaahin i dont love anyone like that before people go off wondering...

nice 1

thx for sharing

bahot khoob Sadzzzzzzzzz :)

wonderful for the first try :)

thank u hehe :blush: